Merry the day with joyful birds' song
On a tree it was but now its gone
Dont blame the birds for this silence
Dont blame the flying stone chase all of them
Guest come and go, but
A strong healthy tree
Not only by a deep root
Not only by having strong branches
Full of flowers may not necessary
Full of fruits may not either
Enough with greeny shoots and leaves here
Because
Without leaves that continue to grow
Contribution of root is only to stay but no passion for life
Trunk and branches show it strength, but hold empty to nothing
Flowers are seasonal, beauty is not here forever
Fruits to attract, forgotten if we lost
So
Dont root in a stand because moving bring progress
Strength in hands is not to show nor to hold others sympathy
Humble to time because beauty is soon to leave when its moving
And remember richness creates illusion to the hearts full of desires
Dont blame
Dont blame the birds
If no more any of them singing around
Dont blame the birds
They were our guests
Guests come and go
But we are standing as living trees
Survive life on our own feet
To hold strength and standing still
Forever beauty and fruit are only,
When we enjoy every second of it
May birds will come
If you will, they will
But as guests may go, we too, move on also
The simplicity of the tree is symbolic to life in the sense of endurance, beauty and fruitfulness leading to aging and succumbing to death. A beautiful poem Soul...10+
an interesting and philosophical poem about where should blame lie? ...............thoughtfully penned US
GuessWho's back, not for long.... just seeing what became of a once unwritten soul... i see it's being written day after day..... writing about birds.. feels like these words are written for me.... i passed by another poem, once up a time i was not.. and i again felt i was being talked to..... byt the way, briefing you up on my life.... im currently in france completing master in fundamental physics (UPMC - paris)
Good to know you are doing well, yes its been a long time since we talk, i almost forget when was the last time we do...i know life is always busy to who living it...i am happy that you made it to join your dream comes true efforts..about these two poems, if you want to know just direct message me because it easier for us then. Dont know when we will talk again hahaha so i just hope that you will always find a way to make your life interesting and lively, keep it up and i just wish the best for you. Live your dream my friend
Yes everything is temporary and moves on and expires as your lovely beautiful poem expresses well. Thumbs up for your thoughts. Warm fond rhanx for your words on mine.
Don't blame the birds for this silence. This is common that guests come and go far. This is wise to survive life on our own feet. We are also like guests in this Earth and we are also supposed to move on. Very thoughtful poem is shared here....10
Yes, no room to blame them, I think that's we who made the birds move,
Yes, rather to blame lets look upon ourselves... Thanks mr Hassan for kind and your time.. You too keep on writing more in your page.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
God helps those who help themselves. Thanks
true...God bless whoever tried to make life better and we as better souls, In this blessing month hope is fertile like a great soil, we just need to help ourselves to make whole green..