Blessed Poem by Aranthabailu Ummar


Rating: 4.8

Expand my chest I got a breath
A rose protruding in it
Let me say goodby to my lonliness

My mind a weaving mechine for many years
The mill run weaving sad and misery
The thread came out hard and untouched

As a weed in paddy field
As a tendril in mango hill
As a creaper in arreca plantation I was alone

Blue sky of shy and twinkling star
Brings dream to darken my room
Moon very cool breaks my fear of discourage

Merry night and twinkling sky
sparks the ocean hot to its woumb
waves wings slaps me to enter into a strong bond

Sea witnessed my love, abonding lonliness
cool and hot blood mixed up in my veins
To be ever with her warming chest bounded by her arms

Suja Nair 12 November 2010

Nice poem, I like it keep writing your thoughts.....

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Seema Chowdhury 31 January 2011

very nice and beautiful thought penned down. deep and reflective poem./thanks for sharing.

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Unwritten Soul 04 September 2011

You are blessed by this great talent, you are blessed to have that gifts...yet dont cry for something you not reach yet, one day a sand will turn gold coz your heart is not just a flesh but it a place for sweet soul..rise Aranthabailu and i like this poem very much, smile_Unwritten Soul

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Seema Chowdhury 08 September 2011

A nice and a heartfelt write,

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Liza Sudina 27 September 2015

genius - so vivid description!

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 17 September 2015

As a weed in paddy field As a tendril in mango hill As a creaper in arreca plantation I was alone The expression of the loneliness is well expressed

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Hazel Durham 08 August 2015

Beautiful write with amazing imagery, thanks for sharing!

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Bharati Nayak 28 July 2015

Yes, bid good bye to loneliness as you are expanding. Nice write.Thanks for sharing.

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Marieta Maglas 03 September 2012

well expressed poem, thank you for sharing..........

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