Monday, October 24, 2011

Broken And Empty

Rating: 5.0
broken and empty
no fight left to carry on
so many heavy thoughts
questions weighing on my mind
answers come from the knife
with its blade held to the cold skin
release shivers through the body
skin is effortlessly punctured
relief drips through the cut
blood spills out the pain
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Rain ... 22 June 2012
My dear friend....... when I read each line of this poem.....I could feel your pain... there is no life without pain but self harming is not the solution for all these pain.... May God bless you
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Kaila George 06 June 2012
This discribes how you feel when your hurting so much, you want to end your life, the budern we carrie at times are to much for us to bare, how can we carrie on, excellent write my friend, your a brillant poet.
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Kara Towe 26 December 2011
It's a defense action, like cutting a snake bite to get draw out the venom, but unfortunately most times it bleeds to much while still the violent pain of the venom still races through our veins, and/or infection sets in later, if we survive, and the very thing we try to escape kills us in the end, worse way to go then the original snake bite. Your poem has deep emotion, and is very moving. Good write. :)
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Pari Dharawat 06 November 2011
this poem is descriptive, gives a picture in your, it is nice and gives an insight what it feels to be broken and empty, though everybody feels, few have courage to write and that to in a poetry. nice Poem keep on writing :)
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Joshua Hillard 30 October 2011
This was a very beautiful poem. I really enjoyed it because it talks about sadness and pain, and the very thought of death, or close to death. This was a magnificent write, I could read it over and over, you definitely got a 10 for this, great job! And I only hope these words never come to life for you, stay happy, and write magnificently like you have been! ! =D
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Anil Kumar Panda 26 October 2011
very nice.there is sadness and pain in the lines.liked it.
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