s.zaynab kamoonpuri

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Busybees Abuzz With Life - Poem by s.zaynab kamoonpuri

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I happen to be a busy bee
always racing with time
since time how it flies for busy bees
Ah wish I could just lasso it
like a cowboy does his horse
and thereby bring it to a standstill!

And if I don't waste this valuable Time
I think I could buy me some extra time
Ah wish I could just catch it
in a nook or a noose
as it flies by at will.

For at this rate the clock is ticking by
like some never exploding time-bomb
while I'm forever running out of time
so I wonder then how still
others just take their time
or be killing time coz they've time to kill!

For I can't be killing this precious time
I don't have any spare time on my hands
And it is but challenging to make a chum
out of that swinging pendulum
It is forever outpacing me
For me it seems time has never stood still.

Thus I'll merely have to resign to the fact
that I could never ever tie down mr. Time
for time and tide have waited for none
It's never going to cease, that monotonous chime
even when ceases to pen, a poet's quill

If the battery in thy clock stops
other clocks would be working timely still
So if you lag behind and don't make it in time
you can be sure there are others who will.

So I better let my time-old
venerable grandfather clock
go on with its carefree
dutiful but devil-may-care tick tock
Yah, let the time do the talk
and still tell it it's simply brill!

Comments about Busybees Abuzz With Life by s.zaynab kamoonpuri

  • Aries Profanisaurus (2/27/2014 5:37:00 AM)

    Accurate and true enough. I like this one (Report) Reply

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  • (2/24/2014 8:29:00 AM)

    Awesome words, beautifully written. I like reading this poem again and again. (Report) Reply

  • Free Bird (2/22/2014 5:49:00 AM)

    i like this one of you too: D simple and interesting : D (Report) Reply

  • Elias Uddin (2/21/2014 8:32:00 AM)

    ...let the time do the talk
    and still tell it it's simply brill!

    (Report) Reply

  • Terry Craddock (2/16/2014 2:27:00 PM)

    'I think I could buy me some extra time' interesting, we can buy time, which equates to time is money (Report) Reply

  • V P Mahur (2/16/2014 6:55:00 AM)

    this is a nice poem. All wish are not fulfilled is the message of the poem. Great work. (Report) Reply

  • Md Asadullah (2/16/2014 1:21:00 AM)

    This is your wonderful poem sister, I enjoyed it from beginin till end. Great theme, great poem :) (Report) Reply

  • (2/15/2014 11:28:00 PM)

    Time waits for no one and with no busy bees there would be no us... great tick tock read...regards (Report) Reply

  • (2/13/2014 3:33:00 PM)

    Very nice. Time keeps on going and going. (Report) Reply

  • Phillip Joshua Jimenez (2/13/2014 6:43:00 AM)

    Truly, no money or effort can buy time back. Therefore, we are all advised to make the most out of every second that we have in this life because a second lost can never be brought back. I'm so amazed at the way you presented this wisdom. God bless you, my friend! : D (Report) Reply

  • Yusuf Rashid Pyrus (2/13/2014 4:45:00 AM)

    Devil may-care tick tock yah, let the time do the talk yah you said it all i love it (Report) Reply

  • Jeri Martindale (2/12/2014 2:37:00 PM)

    Time... My only enemy! ! ! I try my best to stop it, but like u said... It just keeps tick -tock in! ! (Report) Reply

  • (2/10/2014 9:01:00 AM)

    amazing! speaks for a million souls... (Report) Reply

  • Noreen Carden (2/10/2014 8:39:00 AM)

    Great poem and so true time does fly especially as we get older and as you sat time waits for no one (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (2/10/2014 8:00:00 AM)

    Time is fav subject.To me time is healer time is killer.Fab poem. (Report) Reply

  • (2/9/2014 5:19:00 AM)

    A really great poem, like it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 9, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, February 10, 2014

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