A small butterfly
Hovers upon Jasmine,
As white and delicate as
It's petals.
The one turns to two, and then three!
Their golden edge wings like
Conjugated petals dancing free.
Their rapt frisking
Spellbound drumming!
Butterflies on Jasmine flowers give us pleasant moments and glee to us. The inscription about this is so nicely inscribed by you. Thank you dear madam. Full vote or five stars.
I see them fluttering and playing music and dancing around, Great imagery created. Awesome.5 Stars
Such a beautiful poem on Jasmine and the butterfly. Short and sweet one. Thanks for sharing.
poetic mind enjoying here all beautiful where the earthly butterflies shining all like the divine angels
(cont.) OH! I pointed out that typo 4 years ago. Here in the NC 'hills', along the gravel road leading to our home, we see many butterflies some days. : ) bri : )
' It's '....I caught you, Savita! ! ! Go with 'Its', of course, though I too have been 'GUILTY' of the same typo at times. : )))
oh the so lovely verbs you chose for the delicate flutterbys! ! ! you have set them to dancing in our minds and we thank you for the God-inspired words---top marks and a fav
Boy, those butterflies DO multiply! ! bri :) Alas. " its" not " it's" , my friend. ha ha.
I love butterflies flying over flowers. I love to hear flute of my child Lord. His flute motivates me. Hare Krishna,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautifully crafted write with compelling imagery. This marvelous poem made me at close range with the beautiful butterfly and lovely jasmine. Top Marks! !