A small butterfly
Hovers upon Jasmine,
As white and delicate as
It's petals.
The one turns to two, and then three!
Their golden edge wings like
Conjugated petals dancing free.
Their rapt frisking
Spellbound drumming!
I see them fluttering and playing music and dancing around, Great imagery created. Awesome.5 Stars
Butterflies on Jasmine flowers give us pleasant moments and glee to us. The inscription about this is so nicely inscribed by you. Thank you dear madam. Full vote or five stars.
A beautifully crafted write with compelling imagery. This marvelous poem made me at close range with the beautiful butterfly and lovely jasmine. Top Marks! !
oh the so lovely verbs you chose for the delicate flutterbys! ! ! you have set them to dancing in our minds and we thank you for the God-inspired words---top marks and a fav
Boy, those butterflies DO multiply! ! bri :) Alas. " its" not " it's" , my friend. ha ha.
I love butterflies flying over flowers. I love to hear flute of my child Lord. His flute motivates me. Hare Krishna,
poetic mind enjoying here all beautiful where the earthly butterflies shining all like the divine angels
Butterflies and flowers become unable to identify because of their similarity in colour. There is a poem in Malayalam, " Look mother, lot of flowers are flying off from this vine..." Its a coversation between a child and its mother, in which to the child the flying butterflies seem to be flowers themselves. Thank you Savitaji for rewinding the childhood. Full score.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Such a beautiful poem on Jasmine and the butterfly. Short and sweet one. Thanks for sharing.