Never, never you can catch the freedom
Never, never you will be able to
You may only captivate wings, imprisoned serenity
You may claim beauty, what your eyes love to see
As if dove in the cage, freedom is still free,
Sifting through the spaces
As free as the moving breeze
Once, caged birds had freedom
As freedom now passing through this fortress
Don't you wonder, do you know the answer?
Why beauty is fading when happiness is gone
Where happiness gone? ...As it belong to life
So it chasing after freedom
If it is like a bird let the wings find
If it is your heart let your feeling fly
Don't own freedom if you not living
If your mind is the cage
Don't keep my heart as your prisoner
Return my freedom, provide me care
I'll be like loyal birds living around you
Where happiness and freedom are all for you
Never, never you can catch freedom
Never, never you will be able to
I've told you,
Freedom can be owned
Not to be selfishly kept
Just read a good freedom quote, that made me think of your poem: " True freedom is being without anxiety about imperfection" (Sengchan; 6th century)
That such a sweet gesture to think about my poem...imperfection is one of the cage pillars indeed..thanks dear
So true, freedom cannot be taken away from humanity. Bodies can be locked up, but thoughts not. Excellent!
Never, never you can catch the freedom Never, never you will be able to You may only captivate wings, imprisoned serenity You may claim beauty, what your eyes love to see As if dove in the cage, freedom is still free, Sifting through the spaces As free as the moving breeze......impressive expression with lofty theme. A beautiful poem on freedom is amazingly shared.10
Thanks dear for always find my words in this website...thank you for your every kindness!
A great contribution, Soul. I am reminded of the poets who have observed that a physical being may be incarcerated, but an essence, or a soul, or a spirit is entirely free of any and all physical boundaries. A magnificent verse!
Thanks dear, yes...freedom is spiritual that bring physical into statement of living with happiness...thank you for your great way to say.
Hi friend. Yes, one can't slave freedom. While living, breathing in the happiness of others.. is the real submission is the only cage for freedom. So, care is essential in all ways. Very nice poem Unwritten Soul.
Even if we want to capture freedom in the space we cant, we can catch the birds or free people but freedom will detach from body...You understand my idea dear. Thank u for reading my lil work, thank for reading it though my works never polished and good as others. Thanks friend
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
" Don't own freedom if your not living If your mind is the cage" Excellent piece to a wonderful poem.