Catching Freedom Poem by Unwritten Soul

Catching Freedom

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Never, never you can catch the freedom
Never, never you will be able to
You may only captivate wings, imprisoned serenity
You may claim beauty, what your eyes love to see
As if dove in the cage, freedom is still free,
Sifting through the spaces
As free as the moving breeze

Once, caged birds had freedom
As freedom now passing through this fortress
Don't you wonder, do you know the answer?
Why beauty is fading when happiness is gone
Where happiness gone? ...As it belong to life
So it chasing after freedom
If it is like a bird let the wings find
If it is your heart let your feeling fly

Don't own freedom if you not living
If your mind is the cage
Don't keep my heart as your prisoner
Return my freedom, provide me care
I'll be like loyal birds living around you
Where happiness and freedom are all for you

Never, never you can catch freedom
Never, never you will be able to
I've told you,
Freedom can be owned
Not to be selfishly kept

Sunday, June 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Working on this before but scrapped but rewrite the new idea, maybe will still working on this

No cage will keep freedom for you
On your hand if u wish to
Its just here if you can feel
Its not what you see
Happiness is destination
You wont reached freedom is out of your way
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 30 June 2019

" Don't own freedom if your not living If your mind is the cage" Excellent piece to a wonderful poem.

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Hans Vr 13 July 2019

Just read a good freedom quote, that made me think of your poem: " True freedom is being without anxiety about imperfection" (Sengchan; 6th century)

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Unwritten Soul 15 July 2019

That such a sweet gesture to think about my poem...imperfection is one of the cage pillars indeed..thanks dear

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Hans Vr 12 July 2019

So true, freedom cannot be taken away from humanity. Bodies can be locked up, but thoughts not. Excellent!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 July 2019

Never, never you can catch the freedom Never, never you will be able to You may only captivate wings, imprisoned serenity You may claim beauty, what your eyes love to see As if dove in the cage, freedom is still free, Sifting through the spaces As free as the moving breeze......impressive expression with lofty theme. A beautiful poem on freedom is amazingly shared.10

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Unwritten Soul 15 July 2019

Thanks dear for always find my words in this website...thank you for your every kindness!

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Mj Lemon 04 July 2019

A great contribution, Soul. I am reminded of the poets who have observed that a physical being may be incarcerated, but an essence, or a soul, or a spirit is entirely free of any and all physical boundaries. A magnificent verse!

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Unwritten Soul 15 July 2019

Thanks dear, yes...freedom is spiritual that bring physical into statement of living with happiness...thank you for your great way to say.

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Muhammad Ali 02 July 2019

Hi friend. Yes, one can't slave freedom. While living, breathing in the happiness of others.. is the real submission is the only cage for freedom. So, care is essential in all ways. Very nice poem Unwritten Soul.

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Unwritten Soul 02 July 2019

Even if we want to capture freedom in the space we cant, we can catch the birds or free people but freedom will detach from body...You understand my idea dear. Thank u for reading my lil work, thank for reading it though my works never polished and good as others. Thanks friend

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