Come to my life
Like an evening wind
Lingers me a soft touch
In every moves of its sway
Breathe me out from dismay
A bliss has lighting spark in soul
As much as it does cares my heart
Returning the flame once it was gone
Like an evening wind
You touched me
Dont be afraid
If i am not here these days
I will be back someday to you
Till then let the moon be the land
Where our eyes meet at nights
Remind our hearts to know
Our soul still the same
Never change
You've touched my life
Like the evening breeze
Where destiny lend me you
That swaying our hearts blue
A bliss has sparking light my soul
As much as it does cares my heart
Returning the flame once it was gone
Like an evening wind
You are to my soul
Like the evening breeze we go
Touch our hearts with a soul
Like the evening breeze
That's how you touch my soul
Like the evening breeze
If you feel
You'll see
I can feel the warm evening breeze and the hope in this lovely poem.
Just when I think I can spill my emotions upon the page with such beauty, I read your words and realise... I still have some work to do... Keep them coming my friend...
What a fantastic expression! Like the evening breeze we go Touch our hearts with a soul Like the evening breeze That's how you touch my soul Like the evening breeze If you feel You'll see A beautiful metaphorical poem relating to love and soul shared astutely.10
A beautiful song with the evening breeze, very soothing and inspiring one.
Like an Evening Breeze, this song had touched my heart, What can be more beautiful, when we are blessed with such beautiful Evening Breeze.. And which touched your soul, and a fantastic song is flowing out.... Lovely write...Loved it.
beautiful poem. very soft and inspiring like the evening breeze. nice imagery
I like your breaking points, diagonals and then, trunks that keep the pine tree shape firm. I have many poems like that, half of the tree, half of the house, then the column, tunk and foundation...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
superb.the poem is full of hope and light and song is also cute especially the sound of wind.creative and cute.as the whole poem flows.~nb