Come To Me (Like The Evening Breeze) Poem by Unwritten Soul

Come To Me (Like The Evening Breeze)

Rating: 4.6


Come to my life
Like an evening wind
Lingers me a soft touch
In every moves of its sway
Breathe me out from dismay
A bliss has lighting spark in soul
As much as it does cares my heart
Returning the flame once it was gone
Like an evening wind
You touched me

Dont be afraid
If i am not here these days
I will be back someday to you
Till then let the moon be the land
Where our eyes meet at nights
Remind our hearts to know
Our soul still the same
Never change

You've touched my life
Like the evening breeze
Where destiny lend me you
That swaying our hearts blue
A bliss has sparking light my soul
As much as it does cares my heart
Returning the flame once it was gone
Like an evening wind
You are to my soul

Like the evening breeze we go
Touch our hearts with a soul
Like the evening breeze
That's how you touch my soul
Like the evening breeze
If you feel
You'll see

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I did this write, for a song called Evening Breeze where when the idea comes to me i wanted to make a song with the wind blow sounds as an intro and to end this song. This write has personal value, i record this song and sang it, my very first complete whole song i ever did...i really like the evening breeze...i feel my soul in it hahahhaa...just another simple poem, hope you smile along the words_Soul
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(Sound of wind blows)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nader Baheri 16 May 2013

superb.the poem is full of hope and light and song is also cute especially the sound of wind.creative and cute.as the whole poem flows.~nb

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Vipins Puthooran 16 May 2013

'Tis a hope enveloped in faith! ! ! ! Top markssss my soul

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David Wood 17 May 2013

I can feel the warm evening breeze and the hope in this lovely poem.

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Shahzia Batool 23 May 2013

You are talented that's why you have sung a soulful song! ! !

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Cosmic Dreamer 25 May 2013

Just when I think I can spill my emotions upon the page with such beauty, I read your words and realise... I still have some work to do... Keep them coming my friend...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 May 2018

What a fantastic expression! Like the evening breeze we go Touch our hearts with a soul Like the evening breeze That's how you touch my soul Like the evening breeze If you feel You'll see A beautiful metaphorical poem relating to love and soul shared astutely.10

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Amitava Sur 14 July 2014

A beautiful song with the evening breeze, very soothing and inspiring one.

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 August 2013

Like an Evening Breeze, this song had touched my heart, What can be more beautiful, when we are blessed with such beautiful Evening Breeze.. And which touched your soul, and a fantastic song is flowing out.... Lovely write...Loved it.

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Heather Wilkins 21 June 2013

beautiful poem. very soft and inspiring like the evening breeze. nice imagery

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Nassy Fesharaki 08 June 2013

I like your breaking points, diagonals and then, trunks that keep the pine tree shape firm. I have many poems like that, half of the tree, half of the house, then the column, tunk and foundation...

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