Cease-Fire Poem by Vijay Sai R

You painted such a beautiful scenery

Man is so destructive. A good descriptive poem on an important inviromental issue. Well penned! ; D

we are destructing out own environment you have chosen a very important topic to right on.

It a deep poem :) Very emotional, i feel it inside!

I like this. I wrote a poem about the destruction of the sea in a different style some time ago. It was called Fish Supper in Black and White. I would be delighted if you were to read it.

A subject- as so often in your writing- that deals with protecting the weak and the innocent. I love birds and have written a number of poems about them. You might like some of them.

Oil spill-over menace was really endangering the sea creatures very badly.

a nice structure sad how we treat mother earth and her creatures, nice write

This is very intresting in how you have written each word to intail what life can do when faced with world disaters actually this is brilliant and loved how it flowed thanks for sharing

What more can i say? Sai.. This poem is great! A sublime piece.. Thanks for inviting