Cease-Fire Poem by Vijay Sai R

Cease Fire...a nice poem, well written and cleverly designed. Good play of S words.

Beautiful poem. Well penned. I like the S line continuation........... Tfs

This a very good poem. Very educative. A good write kep it up.

floored sir....opening lines of 'S' and vivid description of sea animals their endangered lives....makes it think the strong attention we really need to draw! !

I like this one really gives you something to think about... Isnt it funny how the little things are the things people find hardest to do

A subject- as so often in your writing- that deals with protecting the weak and the innocent. I love birds and have written a number of poems about them. You might like some of them.

Oil spill-over menace was really endangering the sea creatures very badly.

a nice structure sad how we treat mother earth and her creatures, nice write

This is very intresting in how you have written each word to intail what life can do when faced with world disaters actually this is brilliant and loved how it flowed thanks for sharing

What more can i say? Sai.. This poem is great! A sublime piece.. Thanks for inviting