Marieta Maglas

Gold Star - 6,256 Points (19-05-1964 / Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania)

***chaotic Seconds≫≫≫≫ - Poem by Marieta Maglas

Your tongue becomes a
stretch of your
scream. It is, in fact,
a lying tongue, which
breaks the complex
truths until they are
transformed into simple
meanings, exactly in the same manner
the hours are
decomposed into chaotic
seconds to be recomposed
for new hallucinating time. Our
erratic thoughts anguish inside
our ignorance and inside our resignation. Our
spaces seep into another
common one. The light
dances on our exhausted
bodies all its
shades of red. We
love each other in
our dream....



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Topic(s) of this poem: words

Form: Blues Poem


Comments about ***chaotic Seconds≫≫≫≫ by Marieta Maglas

  • (12/23/2016 11:28:00 PM)


    Hi Marieta,

    Congratulations on getting selected as poet of of the day. And this poem, which so well-versed (sorry for the pun) , deserves it. Congrats.
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  • Christina Simmons (12/23/2016 10:04:00 PM)

    Chaotic Second:
    True words! In dreams we always seem to have so much more patient LOVE. That can endure until the end of time. Beautiful! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Electric Lady (12/23/2016 9:30:00 PM)


    This is simply brilliant. Bravo! (Report) Reply

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (12/23/2016 7:01:00 PM)


    Well-written++++++++++++++++++++++ congrats on being selected for the day..... (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (12/23/2016 1:56:00 PM)

    Chaotic Seconds
    This poem of dreams creates images befitting a dreamstate. Well conceived, and executed. +++10


    Robert
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  • (12/23/2016 9:54:00 AM)


    The light dances on our exhausted bodies.....beautiful poem. Full of complex meaning and excellent style. Congratulations for poem of the day place Marieta Maglas. (Report) Reply

  • Tom Allport (12/23/2016 9:36:00 AM)

    tom allport
    screaming simplicity becomes condensed into utter chaos, then sleep prevails (Report) Reply

  • Clarence Prince (12/23/2016 9:02:00 AM)


    A deceiving person has a lying tongue,
    and can be trusted.
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  • Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (12/23/2016 8:37:00 AM)

    Chaotic Seconds
    Love transforms all, a beautiful poem Marieta. Congratulations being member of the day.
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
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  • Seamus O' Brian (12/23/2016 8:29:00 AM)


    Refreshing in its complex creativity. Reading this is like running my fingers over a finely crafted working of wood and feeling the love of the maker's craftsmanship in the smoothness of the surface, the delicacy of the arching, the flawlessness of the joinery. Pure pleasure to read and contemplate. Thank you, good poet, and bravo.
    :)
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  • Ramesh T A (12/23/2016 6:24:00 AM)

    Love
    Indeed love transforms chaotic situation into an acceptable one as in dreams! Congratulations! (Report) Reply

  • Luo Zhihai (12/16/2014 4:31:00 PM)


    Merry christmas!
    I like this poem!
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  • (11/14/2012 9:17:00 PM)


    reaching from chaos to loving dream is beautiful... (Report) Reply

  • (4/2/2010 8:14:00 PM)


    Sometimes I wonder, How many ideas we shall
    until we ran out of them
    For once we ran out
    We will be reliving the past
    But poetry shall bloom
    with your poem
    You set a new stage of veiw
    +10
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  • Is It Poetry (4/1/2010 8:53:00 PM)


    some times i think
    you read my mind..'dear'....iip
    .............. :)
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 1, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, June 3, 2016


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