Children Song Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Children Song

Rating: 4.1


(dedicated to Ms. Hilary Hahn, a great violinist)

beloved butterfly
fly around, fly
never leave sky
cherish me, thee

beloved firefly
fly high, fly
shine the sky
beautify me, thee

beloved teddy
walk around, walk
refresh your thirsty
find fish and talk

beloved twinkle star
jump high, jump
you are not so far
but look like a thumb

if we can be just a little
little speech, little act
maybe we can react
when little demons giggle

(inspired by Camille Pissarro's The Garden of Pontoise)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chitra - 15 December 2008

What a lovely song! univeral in appeal to the child in each one of us

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Meggie Gultiano 15 December 2008

this is great. i particularly love the last stanza. Thanks for sharing

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Sathyanarayana M V S 15 December 2008

I liked the line /usage: ' when demons giggle' good

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 15 December 2008

A well written poem.thanks for sharing.

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Lynda Robson 15 December 2008

I can see this set to music for children to sing, well done my friend, 10 Lynda xx

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Gargi Saha 07 January 2009

WELL WRITTEN. U GET 10++++++++++...........

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Cheung Shun Sang 25 December 2008

Birds have wings and human have cells. very high

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 December 2008

You are really writing and i love that.Thanks for sharing this poem with us to learn from as well. Edward Kofi Louis.

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Ben Gieske 17 December 2008

delightful images and scenes, very playful, and lyrical

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Very Beautiful So many memories are brought back with this one. Thanks for sharing -Brie

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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