Cloudburst Poem by Jacqui Broad

Cloudburst

Rating: 5.0


The sky is crying,
the same as my heart's weeping.
Can you build an arc?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Crimson Love 25 November 2011

So much said, with few words...brilliant write...truly captivating. :)

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 25 November 2011

After every heavy storm, the sun come out again.i hope you find peace in you heart one day & just thank God He made you meet such a remarkable person like D in your life...though he's gone but he'll live forever in your heart Jacqueline...!

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Harindhar Reddy 25 November 2011

Yes it is a good poem by J on D. What about me dear Jacqui.... at-least Speak about your harry.......Just for fun ha! ha! ha! 10+++++++ rating! Miss you.......................

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Asif Andalib 25 November 2011

What a fantastic haiku. Thanks for sharing.

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Jinal Oswal 25 November 2011

I wish the sun, peeps in from the raining clouds and you become lucky and witness the rainbow.. Take care :)

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Renu Kakkar 19 January 2012

a very good haiku...liked it immensely

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Federico del Corazón 23 December 2011

Jacquie, always able to capture life’s true moments. A question for you, what would you put in your Arc?

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Melancholy Man 30 November 2011

Wow! Such power and depth in only 3 lines - very well written.

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Hans Vr 26 November 2011

Can feel the loss in this very nice haiku. Wish you lots of strength

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Eric Cockrell 26 November 2011

loading up hammers, nails, and boards to send you! short, and powerful! good poem!

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