Oh come, the day
come in my arms
I long to feel
the light as though
it's mine
Come, the words
in a waterfall
strike the pebbles
with all your love
I'm empty
as an un-sung joy
come, fill me
with poems.
Nosheen Irfan © 2017
There is such great beauty in the succinctness of this poem. A very well deserved Poem Of The Day. Congratulations, Nosheen!
Awesome......Ray of hope and with full of positivity this poem goes straight to my favourite place..Congrats Dear Nosheen Ji...100+++
Being the morning person that I am, I like this one very much.I do most of my writing in the mornings. I like the way you blend sensual images with inspiration here.
A fabulous poem - -it is as if I am asking the day with its yellow light.Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day.
I am not exaggerating. You are a genuine poet. A blessed soul. Go ahead! !
As unforgettable and great as I have never encountered before. The stars pale, at the spiritual greatness found in this brilliant Gem.
A longing for fulfillment of desires nicely articulated. Thanks & Congrats.