Crying Drops Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Crying Drops

Rating: 4.5


Drops
Rain drops
Touching breeze
From the dawn sky
With the smiling clouds
Splashing sovereign sleep
Around the dreamy bed of life
Amphan ungratefully offered
Affliction within flowing tension
Sleep breaker vaccination in sane
Love in strikingly free daydream
Transient nurture greets bliss
Windstorm of the relief
In allotment shield
Coughing up high
Rates of loss
In science
Cry


21.05.2020 Chattogram

Thursday, May 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: affliction,life,present
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 May 2020

nice breast poetry post cyclone glad to see you still love these hope all's well with mb of bd

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 May 2020

A wonderful poem...touching expression! Thanks for sharing....10++++

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 21 May 2020

transient nature underpins the whole message

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Indira Renganathan 31 May 2020

Now is the phase of a test that we are forced to remind ourselves of our karma....a persistent prayer alone can show light in the present darkness...when we are helpless what else could be a better remedy than prayer....let us all hope for a bright future....indeed a thought provoking poem 10/10

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Valsa George 31 May 2020

We are beset with afflictions of one sort o the other. On one side there is the pandemic. on the other, there are natural calamities like flood and cyclone as Amphan. Life has become tortuous! A great poem! Enjoyed the format of your poem. A sure 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 May 2020

Flowing tension! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 23 May 2020

the dreamy bed of life.......lovely. anjandev roy.

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Akhtar Jawad 21 May 2020

Liked the thoughts, the description and the pattern of the poem.

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