Death Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Death

Rating: 5.0


Someone is coming slowly on the coolest foot
The sound of footprint is clear on the path
Someone who loves forever is coming
And a demonstration is marching on …

From the other side of the hill coming
Crossing all the walls coming
Endless pink love coming
Symphony dancing with moon coming …

I'm waiting for a full-length love
A warm and exciting yellowish pink embrace
A cool and calm bluish green kiss
I got a chilly sms - someone is coming!


Poem 08
Book 'Beckoning Jade-Dreams' April 2007
Copyright Musharrat Mahjabeen
Mizan Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8700-82-X

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gargi Saha 27 September 2008

A nice way of expressing the arrival of death. Thanks for your nice comments on my poems The Birth Of Christ &Misery Misery Everywhere.

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Estrella Baldemosa 21 September 2008

i agree with Obed, the elixer of life is change, from dying we grow, death is the instructor...great poem. you write well.

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Priya kumar 21 September 2008

hai..tnx even ur poem is jus luvly........can u help me..actually i ryt short stories but i hav no idea which is a correct site that could help me 2 express my stories...do know any? if u do i would b glad

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Reshma Ramesh 18 September 2008

wow neat.............

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Mehmet YILMAZLAR 18 September 2008

i didnt imagine as that

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beautiful one with expresions. death is fearsoe/......good expresiion always from u...10 read mine will i die?

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Saeid Hadavand 19 May 2009

Now I can realize the death...

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C. P. Sharma 17 May 2009

Unique and modern. Lovely poem. CP

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Min Sia 09 November 2008

I love reading poems about the reality of death. This poems will certainly be one of my favorite. It's great! A masterpiece! ! !

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Lenox Brown 01 October 2008

hey man. this poem is a good attempt to explain death. i do think its a little short and the short sms thing did not cut it for me. i could give you a 7.

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