*** Desire *** Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

*** Desire ***

Rating: 4.6


Desire intends to merge
With addiction
Crossfire, in between the feat
Body wasting…
Mind jumps into brazen pool
Honey melts, drips in crushes
Soul catching soul
Diaphragm of craving enlarges
Waves of blood, rush incessantly
Desire floods the veins
Longing invades taste
As long as the Sun is alive
I can see the hope, shining so bright
As long as the nights, painted in blue
I can see the twining possible
Dear, dearer dearest
Catch me…
Let me breathe your soiled love
Weighed in heavy drooling lust
Allow me to swim in your ocean of devotion
Drown…die smiling
Desire defeats desire
Decorative euphony

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

nice poem i'm new at this

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Melvina Germain 14 January 2009

oooou this just gave me chills, oh yes, love it. Your imagry is so full of life, sensuality spills over every intoxicating word. I felt it, yes you definitely took me there and what a pleasurable place to be.

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Being Emo Is Who I am 07 January 2009

This is a really good poem... it is full of feelings and very understanding....

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Mimi Fakhira 29 December 2008

A desire deep beyond the Taj Mahal of dreams.. I didn't know you had a poem in the Top500 Poems! Still, it's a very beautiful poem. Full of feelings. Love it!

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Sarah Sisson 26 December 2008

Very capturing poetry...love it!

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Midifo Yearns 23 July 2009

Your choice of words and images is superb and involving. Very good. Thanks

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Zeinab Sherif 19 June 2009

EVERY POEM I READ I 'M REFRESHED, BEST WISHES, KEEP UP.10+++

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khadesia Paige 10 April 2009

Each time i read this poem my heart melts i love it i realy realy love it my only thought was of you posting it in a newspaper where maybe someone will notice it and convince you to make your own poetry book :) great job luv always (well ur poems lol we never realy met) keep doing what your doing.

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Rage Allay 02 February 2009

It's the longing for satisfaction that heightens the desire within us. Wow. This is beautifully crafted. You deserved to be among the tops. Congratulations!

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Greenwolfe 1962 20 January 2009

Desire on desire. What a concept. Fire on fire! GW62

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