RAKHI
the threads of bondage
the colours of love
the pearls of feelings
will keep you tied
forever with your roots
Rajkumr@Kolkata04-08-2008
Yes it will Sir till sonoral and fraternal relationships sustain all odds of life.
'the pearls of feelings will keep you tied forever with your roots'..i quote these lines coz these i like most..forever with roots, means it is always alive...and pearls are precious gems, so by just these lines, the poem is great.. naizz
no lights can enlighten the lives of the down-trodden...........beautiful lines.......so true...........
very beautiful and delicate, the bond of relationships- lovely expression 10 Mamta
the colour brigs out not the relation but the joy in that relation
you give a good definition for Rakhi there...meaningful bonding...nice...thanks
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very well said Rajkumar...beautiful poem