Drunk By My Self. Poem by JOSE MURGUIA
Drunk By My Self.
well its just you and me
a bottle full of liquor,
one shot after another
as i begin to feel drunk even quicker,
suicide thoughts begin to run,
as i light up my cigarette
and load up my gun,
sad thoughts are runnin thru my mind,
i must search for answers and find,
should i go or should i stay,
and as my tears fall from my eyes
i begin to pray,
god have mercy on my soul,
god i beg for you to take control,
im rich but i feel poor,
this cant be life theres gotta be more,
i need to know whats on the other side of the door,
im on my knees
im beggin on the floor,
god didnt respond,
a few seconds later there was a loud sound,
the next day a body with a bible was found..
written sometime in 2008.
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia
Your very talented and very deep... wonderful poem! great write and keep it up! give it a 10!
you got skills I'll give you that Is a good write I agree with Greenwolfe 1962 It has a moral
one of the best you've written! i loved it! a tear jerker and a wonderful story of this man trying to find the light. to bad he died but it taught me a lesson! ! i loved this! the whole thing flowed very well, i would check the rhythm in the 4 line.. as i begin to feel drunk.... maybe you could change the way it flows to fit in the line above it better. but other then that it was wonderful.
this is good work i loved it, and know how you feel, so good job.
I like it. sounds great in my mind and paints a dark tell, thanks 10
Dark. I like a dark poem. The emotions through your head at the time must have been extreme. Keep that in mind when you write more. Love it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 6:09:13 AM # 1.0.0
Morbid... but good! ! !