Earth Status Poem by Obed dela Cruz

Earth Status



(IT TOOK ME DAYS FOR ME TO FORMULATE THE TITLE)
(I HOPE BOTH TITLE AND CONTENT IS GOOD)

Earth used to be an immortal garden
Where the butterflies are everywhere seen.
But it was swarmed by locusts sent by men,
Now it’s a place you cannot imagine.

Through the riverbanks, waters used to flow
And air was given freely to fishes.
But things changed because maybe tomorrow
Dead fishes will be scattered in places.

Trees are being cut off for one’s business.
Nature is being damaged brutally.
A planet once filled of great resources
Is now kissing the future painfully.

Earth as we know it shall come to an end
If we will not make actions that are wise.
O let this planet count you as its friend,
Make it a picture you will not despise.

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Copyright © 2010 by OBED DELA CRUZ

(Poem Content written on April 14,2010)
(Poem Title on April 16)
(MARIKINA CITY, PHILIPPINES)

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Omar Ibrahim 21 May 2010

man is working for his personal benefit.nothing concerns him except money and pleasure.I liked the way you expressed that. thanks for sharing

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Supriya Prathapan 21 May 2010

Its high time we stop abusing 'Mother Earth' else she will let loose her fury in the form of natural disasters. Very well written.

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Ency Bearis 20 May 2010

Good advocate write about the nature, a fantastic concept.

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Nathaniel Flying Owl 19 May 2010

Excellent way to address the issues of our time. Good to know that you adore Nature.

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Krishnarasa Seshadri 19 May 2010

So true! Your poem brings out the harsh reality!

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Prashant Shaurya 19 June 2010

beautiful obed... i read it first.. then played 'earth song by MJ and read it alongside.. love prashant

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Kranthi Pothineni 29 May 2010

Meaningful craft. Good.

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Yes more of us should be writing on this theme. I did a few also, one on 'Illegal logging' in Indonesia a few months back. More needed.

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 23 May 2010

Love this poem very much... And Obed, I'm agree with the title, both the title and the content are very nice...

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Diane Violet 21 May 2010

Good powerful write Obed.

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