Empty Heart Poem by Beach Girl

Empty Heart

Rating: 4.2


Powdery, white grains of sand
Softly sifted through my hand.

Flinging sand out towards the sea
Whirling winds blew all away

Raised my eyes out to the blue
Distant whispers closer grew.

Waded out into the waves
Stood trembling and waiting.

Cross miles and miles of endless sea
I thought I heard you call my name.

You strode into my empty heart
Of vacant halls and silent pain.

Your laughter filled up every room
Left smiles in every corner.

With hushed tones and eager love
We bound our hearts together.

One day I hope to touch your face
And look into your eyes

Until that time, I'll only dream
Of emerald isles and you.

Thursday, September 5, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cassandra Jasmine 05 September 2013

Beautiful poem! Light and airy, yet descriptive. Bravo!

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Jodie Hardy 05 September 2013

Beautiful, Lovely flowing and light poem, I hope you find the person of your dreams xx

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Gajanan Mishra 05 September 2013

emptyness I like, I know emptyness means fullness, thanks. good write. I invite you to read my poems and comment and vote if you pleased.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 January 2014

'You strode into my empty heart And found that it was vacant' - So cute!

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Suman Kumar Das 02 December 2013

My heart got brimmed with love after reading such spectacular song.............................. liked it.

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 August 2019

Cross miles and miles of endless sea I thought I heard you call my name. You strode into my empty heart Of vacant halls and silent pain. very fine poem. indeed so romantic in its essence. tony

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Shahin Latif 29 November 2015

Truly romantic poem. Good ink! I enjoyed it. So, Thanks a lot dearest poet Beach Girl. Be well always.

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Bri Edwards 12 December 2014

sorry about the smiles. i'll come over tonight and clean those up. bri :) p.s. i would be looking in my inbox and at my poem comments, BUT could not access them. but i COULD access my favorite poets, and you are one of them.

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Chuy Amante 11 March 2014

As they say on the street: Amor de legos es amor de pendejos! Love is everywhere, open up and take some! ! ! ! keeping putting your heart on paper, you do it well! ! ! full of FEEL!

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V P Mahur 02 March 2014

dear Beach this one is a lovely song full of love feelings Thanks for a nice musical note I invite you to read my poems.

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