Endymion Poem by Colin Ian Jeffery

Endymion

Rating: 5.0


Quietly he endures
Without anger or reproach
Suffering for my sake.

Taking my hand
Leads me forth
Safe from each burning land.

Sunday, September 28, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 04 October 2008

A great illustration of a perfect love written by a novel poet.

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Gaitty Ara 03 October 2008

Pristine and immaculate imagery...! ! short and beautiful

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Reshma Ramesh 01 October 2008

wow....short sweet and perfect

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 01 October 2008

never let your faith die... its the only entity that leads till the end... :) simple and bful... like a prayer... :)

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Tess Rockenstire 30 September 2008

Colin Ian Jeffery...there's no other person on earth who could lead our hand..yet suffered for our sake. Our faith will always guide our way...thank your for sharing this great piece. Tess

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Margery Rehman 09 November 2008

Written well with feeling. Simply expressed. Regards, Margery R.

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Elysabeth Faslund 17 October 2008

Your 6-4-6 stanza meter does, indeed, add much to the placement of these cherishing words...Endymion...and what a historical figure/legend for a title! 'without reproach'...this, the most worthy phrase! Indeed! A kind read, a soothing read!

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John Nightingale 06 October 2008

This is moving and comforting. So few words express so much.

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Fiona Davidson 05 October 2008

Beautifully written Colin...perfect what else can I say?

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Cheung Shun Sang 05 October 2008

Very good but quite sad. Again by hugo -my very name endure the cruel doomed. He and you let me think

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