Trapped in a dimension where Darkness overpowers light
Leaving a trail of sorrow, grief, and pure rage
Trying to figure out why this world carries everlasting night
And why I'm alone stuck and trapped in this cage
The Darkness protrudes the rest of the sources of living
Making life seem worthless and to proceed with life futile
Another day, another pain, and the cycle continues to be giving
And in the cabinet filled with hurt I opened a nasty case, a new file
In order to leave the depths of hades I must become a heartless being
And leave all my love for her right behind too
But she taught my eyes smell and my nose to practice seeing
And to forget the things she did for me I simply can't do
However there is another way I can escape this vortex but then people'll call me crazy
I just no for sure there has to be some better way.
They'll laugh at me talk about me and call me lazy
But it's all worth just to again see the light of day.
*Virus 11 - Shadow*
Copyright 8/6/08 ©® Corey Threet
PLEASE COMMENT!
A deep and dark poem Corey - nice write. See my similar poems of darkness: My sneaking Tears and Ocean of Pain Regards Mark
corey, i have a poem like that too, we right words but it doesnt mean they define or confine what we are... nice read... thank you
very good write. i can totally realate to this piece. at times we get warped in a pit of despair. the walls of the world start to close in on us and we are trapped, helpness, not knowing who to turn to. great job
A Very Talented Write... The Storyline Was Riveting, Each Verse Flowed Rhythmically, The Words A Delight To Read... Also, The Emotions Swirled Around Each Word... (Especially, The Part About Leaving Love, To Find Light) I Really Enjoyed It... Forgot to vote, but will go back and give it a big '10'... Keep 'Em Coming Kiddo... Poet Friend, MoonBee
I love the raw pain and It was just amazing I feel the same way a lot.
Ohhhh.....I love this peom. The darkness and emotion in this poem makes me feel so.....broken and free. Emo boys are the men after my own heart eternally.
I liked the dark feeling in your poem.I think this one is way better then the 1 one.Anyway maybe you could improve the structure a bit.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very deep and touching...........read mine two in the morning.......on the same lines....well penned