Eternal Love Poem by Unwritten Soul

Eternal Love

Rating: 4.5


Childhood is my old home with you
Here, in heart is where you build it
for your love stay last you said
I know it maybe few years
But this sweet memories
Always keep me safe,
shelter my soul again
Protect me from pain
Yes time may flies
No i wont forget
For love you are
This is home
i will ever stay
In anywhere i am
With you, in my heart

O those Innocent days
Missed and now
gone behind
and leave me
alone without you
my dear mom
my dear love
once
and all times

Tears wont cry
water wont flow
Still i do cry
Breeze wipe cold
Times freeze my soul
For a while i stare upon past
returned to your shadows
Silence is a way we talk here
To bring good old smiles
With color resurfacing eyes
Memories recalled
Whispered to me
Like i hearing you
Again and again
A calling voice
A voice
of Yours
sweet
but time has come
and we have to say goodbye
I always try but i never believe it
They may say i lied but to me you not die
But just only unseen by eyes
because in heart
still have you
with me
our perfect home
My sole heart

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicate this writing to my friend, Sunprincess and her late mother.As her mom gone last year on Dec14, And Also dedicate this poem to Kee Thamphi who always live his life with her late mother...This poem dedicate to two of my good friends here...Dears, May God protect us from sorrows and let love eternal...Yes Love is eternal in our home, our hearts. Dear sunprincess my friend, dont cry just believe that your mom is always living in your heart so keep happy so she will feel the same inside and above_Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Farah Ilyas 03 June 2013

Touching poem with the message to have soft heart+corner for others, May her mother in rest & peace forever (aamin) ....your support & favor must work wonders for these suffering beings hopefully, always be happy you indeed have a fertile soul planted by love of nature..well done

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Frank James Davis 05 April 2013

You have a warm, profound sensitivity to fellow human beings; the impact of your tender and perceptive poetry certainly reflects that. Eternal Love is gratifying to read!

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Spiritual Seeker 01 February 2013

Your heart touches others....living! Great piece.

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Wahab Abdul 10 January 2013

lovely poem, i enjoyed it fully...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 May 2018

Part - 2 Dear Soul, you have so nicely presented this poem on account of the death of mother of your friend Sunprincess. It is a great tribute to her mother and nice dedication to Kee Thamphi who always lives his life with her late mother. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 May 2018

Part - 1 We often remember the memories of childhood how did we spend the time with friends, parents and with brothers, and sisters. Especially the love of mother and her sweet voices are rememberable. When mother's soul leaves body we often feel grief but soul is immortal and it takes next birth. (continued)

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Mj Lemon 12 June 2017

This is amazing, Soul. Childhood is everyone's old home. At some point in life we all return. We all have losses, experience tragedies, and so we may be prompted on that path of return. When we arrive, we find peace and rediscover our perfect home.

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Unwritten Soul 13 June 2017

One of the Greatest thing we may have is to have a spacious heart, this space is to keep other greatest thing, and the best..the ones who we treasured most in our beating life, our family and friends who ever live in our life....something can make a tragedy in our heart, but as it a home for many beloved ones inside...i think it copes for us to heal easier...and to put smile again after cry :) Thank you my sweet friend MJ lemon :)

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Dee Corpolongo 30 September 2013

With the tears in my eyes, which is truly no surprise, , , , my thoughts turn to my MOM, whom I miss all the time... Beautiful poem made for a friend~ with your loving words that you send...being the beautiful SOUL that you are.. with a heart so beautiful to possess.

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 September 2013

Touching poem Soul...Really Mothers love is eternal..Loved reading each lines.. Fantastic write...

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