Farewell / अलविदा (Hindi)

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Farewell by Rabindranath Tagore
अलविदा: मूल रचना गुरुदेव रवीन्द्रनाथ टैगोर
हिंदी भावानुवाद रजनीश मंगा द्वारा

मुझको छुट्टी मिल गयी है. मुझे विदा कीजिये भाइयो
मेरा आप सब को नमस्कार और अब इजाज़त दीजिये.

ये मेरे दरवाजे की चाबी कृपया वापिस लीजिये
कोई भी दावा मेरा अब इस घर पे बाकी है नहीं
जाने से पहले मैं आपका आशीर्वचन पा कर चलूँगा

लंबे समय तक हम पड़ौसी बन के आपस में रहे
किन्तु जितना तुमसे पाया मैं तो उतना दे न पाया
अब सुबह होने को है
और मेरे अँधेरे कोने को जिसने प्रकाशित था किया
वो दिया भी बुझ गया है.
बुलावा आ गया है और सफ़र के वास्ते तैयार मैं भी हूँ.

This is a translation of the poem Farewell by Rabindranath Tagore
Wednesday, August 12, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: blessings,farewell,hindi,journey,translation
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Farewell
by Rabindranath Tagore

I have got my leave. Bid me farewell, my brothers!
I bow to you all and take my departure.

Here I give back the keys of my door
- -and I give up all claims to my house.
I only ask for last kind words from you.

We were neighbors for long,
but I received more than I could give.
Now the day has dawned
and the lamp that lit my dark corner is out.
A summons has come and I am ready for my journey.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 13 August 2020

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Aarzoo Mehek 13 August 2020

Farewells are painful but life is a journey and cherishing all the good times and moving on is what life is all about. A humble tribute to the good old times. Beautifully translated by you makes the poem more beautiful. My compliments Rajnish jii 10++

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me poet yeps poet 12 August 2020

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 August 2020

Rabridthnath Tagore is one of my fav Classic poets and you did him justice with a great fab translation of his poem. Seems to be about a neighbor embarking on passing away journey wow! Kudos!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 August 2020

We were neighbors for long, but I received more than I could give. Now the day has dawned and the lamp that lit my dark corner is out. A summons has come and I am ready for my journey. ANTICIPATORY POETRY HE GOT A NOBEL SO TILL TODAY WE ALL RING HIS DOOR BELL TAKE HIM WELL SLEEP WELL TIME ONLY TO SOME ONE DOES TELL The flickering candle is the light of knell RM JI STAY WELL

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?? ???? ?????? ?? ???? ????? ????? ?????? ??? ?? ???? ???? ?? ?? ?? ?? ???? ?? ???? ???? ?? ???? ??? ???? ???????? ?? ?? ?????? Wonderful poem so beautifully translated, Rajnish ji......10

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Kezia Kezia 18 August 2020

bahut sundar shriman. dhanyawad...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 August 2020

You have translated Tagore's poem in heart touching manner. Telling goodbye to others we express our emotion. Long time's neighbor remains in memory and we feel the emotion of such moment.We feel the life's journey with goodbye. An excellent poem is well penned....10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 15 August 2020

This is a Masterpiece by the great Mr. Rabindranath Tagore Sir. I am so thankful to you Rajnish Sir, because you translated this Masterpiece, I can read that. Such a Beauty! Thank you so much, Rajnish Sir! A 10+++

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 14 August 2020

great composition.......a poem of times indeed........10+

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