Perfectly fitted as if by design
Your five fingers woven in mine
Coupled palms sublimely connecting
Severed love lines now intersecting
Sharing laughs and spending time
Captive souls forever entwined
Sweet sweet sweet and perfectly divine! Love it.
Oh Brian, this is a most beautiful love poem, What a lovely change to read something about love, I lilke that---Melvina---
so romantic..wish someone would write a poem like that about my fingers..its so refreshing to read poems of love written from the masculine perspective.. so passionate, astute and sensual.
Beautifully crafted poem. Fits me like a warm glove. All plaudits are well deserved! Best wishes. jack
Plain and simple and short. A 'love' poem. bri : )
Perfectly fitted as if by design Your five fingers woven in mine- - - > holding the hand of the one you love is another way to make love
it's really beautiful poem shared Your five fingers woven in mine Coupled palms sublimely connecting/// beautiful writings
It is by the hands that love lit its spark to connect the hearts of lovers. Romantic poetry Brian, worth a 10.
Wonderful poem Brian! One of the best love poems I've ever read! Way to capture the moment. I felt it! Top marks! -Michael
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Brian, I LOVE this piece! It's simplistic yet powerful. You have combined a powerhouse of words eloquently! Great write!