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Five Fingers

Rating: 4.8
Perfectly fitted as if by design
Your five fingers woven in mine
Coupled palms sublimely connecting
Severed love lines now intersecting
Sharing laughs and spending time
Captive souls forever entwined
Brian Dorn
Thursday, June 22, 2006
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Susan Williams 09 September 2020
Perfectly fitted as if by design Your five fingers woven in mine- - - > holding the hand of the one you love is another way to make love
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Mahtab Bangalee 25 July 2019
it's really beautiful poem shared Your five fingers woven in mine Coupled palms sublimely connecting/// beautiful writings
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Marvin Brato 15 October 2007
It is by the hands that love lit its spark to connect the hearts of lovers. Romantic poetry Brian, worth a 10.
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Michael Fischer 29 April 2007
Wonderful poem Brian! One of the best love poems I've ever read! Way to capture the moment. I felt it! Top marks! -Michael
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Melvina Germain 16 February 2007
Oh Brian, this is a most beautiful love poem, What a lovely change to read something about love, I lilke that---Melvina---
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Sandy Jensen 10 February 2007
so romantic..wish someone would write a poem like that about my fingers..its so refreshing to read poems of love written from the masculine perspective.. so passionate, astute and sensual.
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jack russell 07 January 2007
Beautifully crafted poem. Fits me like a warm glove. All plaudits are well deserved! Best wishes. jack
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Not a member No 4 10 December 2006
Six lines that perfectly fit their function. A poetic arrow that hits the bulls-eye. jim
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Arti Chopra 06 December 2006
absolutely beautiful in just a few lines...You have conveyed so much. I love this poem..well done Bryan Arti
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Gregory Gunn 14 November 2006
Don't know how else to say this, but 'For a poem that uses rhyme, / This one is absolutely divine.' It is one of those where it crossed my mind, hey, why didn't I think of that? High praise from Mr. Shot Gunn.
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