poet Brian Dorn

Brian Dorn

Five Fingers

Perfectly fitted as if by design
Your five fingers woven in mine
Coupled palms sublimely connecting
Severed love lines now intersecting
Sharing laughs and spending time
Captive souls forever entwined

Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 22, 2006
Poem Edited: Monday, August 9, 2010

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  • Susan WilliamsSusan Williams (9/9/2020 2:29:00 PM)

    Perfectly fitted as if by design
    Your five fingers woven in mine- - - > holding the hand of the one you love is another way to make love

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (7/25/2019 3:32:00 AM)

    it's really beautiful poem shared
    Your five fingers woven in mine
    Coupled palms sublimely connecting/// beautiful writings

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  • Marvin Brato (10/15/2007 5:37:00 AM)

    It is by the hands that love lit its spark to connect the hearts of lovers. Romantic poetry Brian, worth a 10.

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  • Michael Fischer (4/29/2007 1:59:00 PM)

    Wonderful poem Brian! One of the best love poems I've ever read! Way to capture the moment. I felt it! Top marks!
    -Michael

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  • Melvina GermainMelvina Germain (2/16/2007 12:04:00 AM)

    Oh Brian, this is a most beautiful love poem, What a lovely change to read something about love, I lilke that---Melvina---

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  • Sandy Jensen (2/10/2007 12:47:00 AM)

    so romantic..wish someone would write a poem like that about my fingers..its so refreshing to read poems of love written from the masculine perspective.. so passionate, astute and sensual.

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  • jack russell (1/7/2007 8:56:00 AM)

    Beautifully crafted poem. Fits me like a warm glove. All plaudits are well deserved!
    Best wishes.
    jack

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  • Not a member No 4 (12/10/2006 5:24:00 PM)

    Six lines that perfectly fit their function. A poetic arrow that hits the bulls-eye. jim

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  • Arti ChopraArti Chopra (12/6/2006 12:58:00 AM)

    absolutely beautiful in just a few lines...You have conveyed so much.
    I love this poem..well done Bryan
    Arti

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  • Gregory Gunn (11/14/2006 5:58:00 PM)

    Don't know how else to say this, but 'For a poem that uses rhyme, / This one is absolutely divine.' It is one of those where it crossed my mind, hey, why didn't I think of that? High praise from Mr. Shot Gunn.

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  • Christine K. Trease (11/2/2006 7:49:00 AM)

    Brian, I LOVE this piece! It's simplistic yet powerful. You have combined a powerhouse of words eloquently! Great write!

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  • Kathy Anderson (10/3/2006 5:12:00 PM)

    Sweet sweet sweet and perfectly divine! Love it.

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  • Mary Naylor (9/30/2006 9:51:00 PM)

    An enchanting poem! I enjoyed it very much.

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  • Melvina GermainMelvina Germain (9/29/2006 12:06:00 AM)

    I've always said along with others, Good things come in small packages. This is a wonderful poem Brian.

    Melvina

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  • Lynne Bc (8/12/2006 1:06:00 AM)

    Loved this Brian.
    Thanks for this wonderful thoughts.
    Cheers, Lynne

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  • Ruby Root (7/16/2006 4:24:00 PM)

    Hi Brian, I love your poetry, it is light and fun. You sound like you are happy soul. Excellent poem take care.

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  • Diana Poems (7/11/2006 1:04:00 PM)

    Beautifully written. Lovely imagery and very compassionately done. Very nice, thanks! Keep writing :)

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  • Chuck Audette (7/6/2006 4:26:00 PM)

    Truly great poetry here. 10 for sure! -chuck

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  • John Tiong ChunghooJohn Tiong Chunghoo (7/6/2006 10:47:00 AM)

    two boats of bliss sailing through universe. good one brian.

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  • Aisha Sherazi (7/5/2006 9:22:00 PM)

    Wow. Sorry, cliche I know, but wow. Peace, Aisha

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