Five Fingers Poem by Brian Dorn

Five Fingers

Rating: 4.8


Perfectly fitted as if by design
Your five fingers woven in mine
Coupled palms sublimely connecting
Severed love lines now intersecting
Sharing laughs and spending time
Captive souls forever entwined

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christine K. Trease 02 November 2006

Brian, I LOVE this piece! It's simplistic yet powerful. You have combined a powerhouse of words eloquently! Great write!

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Kathy Anderson 03 October 2006

Sweet sweet sweet and perfectly divine! Love it.

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Melvina Germain 16 February 2007

Oh Brian, this is a most beautiful love poem, What a lovely change to read something about love, I lilke that---Melvina---

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Sandy Jensen 10 February 2007

so romantic..wish someone would write a poem like that about my fingers..its so refreshing to read poems of love written from the masculine perspective.. so passionate, astute and sensual.

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jack russell 07 January 2007

Beautifully crafted poem. Fits me like a warm glove. All plaudits are well deserved! Best wishes. jack

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Bri Edwards 01 January 2023

Plain and simple and short. A 'love' poem. bri : )

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Susan Williams 09 September 2020

Perfectly fitted as if by design Your five fingers woven in mine- - - > holding the hand of the one you love is another way to make love

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Mahtab Bangalee 25 July 2019

it's really beautiful poem shared Your five fingers woven in mine Coupled palms sublimely connecting/// beautiful writings

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Marvin Brato 15 October 2007

It is by the hands that love lit its spark to connect the hearts of lovers. Romantic poetry Brian, worth a 10.

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Michael Fischer 29 April 2007

Wonderful poem Brian! One of the best love poems I've ever read! Way to capture the moment. I felt it! Top marks! -Michael

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