Perfectly fitted as if by design
Your five fingers woven in mine
Coupled palms sublimely connecting
Severed love lines now intersecting
Sharing laughs and spending time
Captive souls forever entwined
Brian, I LOVE this piece! It's simplistic yet powerful. You have combined a powerhouse of words eloquently! Great write!
Don't know how else to say this, but 'For a poem that uses rhyme, / This one is absolutely divine.' It is one of those where it crossed my mind, hey, why didn't I think of that? High praise from Mr. Shot Gunn.
absolutely beautiful in just a few lines...You have conveyed so much. I love this poem..well done Bryan Arti
Six lines that perfectly fit their function. A poetic arrow that hits the bulls-eye. jim
Perfectly fitted as if by design Your five fingers woven in mine- - - > holding the hand of the one you love is another way to make love
it's really beautiful poem shared Your five fingers woven in mine Coupled palms sublimely connecting/// beautiful writings
It is by the hands that love lit its spark to connect the hearts of lovers. Romantic poetry Brian, worth a 10.
Wonderful poem Brian! One of the best love poems I've ever read! Way to capture the moment. I felt it! Top marks! -Michael
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sweet sweet sweet and perfectly divine! Love it.