Five Liner. A Hen's Cackling Poem by Valsa George
Five Liner. A Hen's Cackling
I hear the hen cackling after laying the egg
Gently flapping her wings in excitement
What does she announce to the world?
Her joy over seeding the Earth
Could it be the same joy, a mother feels after childbirth?
Very creative indeed......Valsa.......really no joy is better than the joy of creation.....wonderful composition....10
haha..something to ponder on...may b they have d same feelings for bringing a wonderful creature to existence in this Earth
That is the joy of creating abilities, one can imagine how much God enjoyed when he became a creator!
Wonderful five liner poem raising an eternal question. Thanks for sharing
Deep imagination. Aptly envisioned in five lines.Many thanks.
Deep imagination. Aptly envisioned in five lines.Many thanks.
Sure, she is a mother and the joy should be the same as it is universal. Good theme for a five-liner.
Wonderful imagination, Valsa! As you say it must be the same joy the mother feels after giving birth to a child. Beautiful five -liner!
Questions of nature's wonder are beautifully posed through chicken cackling after laying an egg. Nice poem. Enjoyed. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 6:29:58 AM # 1.0.0
Valsa- profound and ennobling thinking in this little five liner. Creation in any form is a beautiful thing to behold-10