Five Liner- Another Dawn Poem by Valsa George
Five Liner- Another Dawn
In my eyes fall the golden rays
Of the sun about to begin his race
A cool breeze caresses my face
It ruffles my hair as a lover's touch
To another day of sun shine, I awake
Great imagery painted with wonderful and shining words.......Valsa........amazing write......10
A Beautiful poem Valsa. Sun rise tell us the new day has began is as good as lover's touch that make our day most beautiful. A Beautiful day has began with beautiful flow of words from your pen. Loved it.
The beautiful synergy of man and nature captured in rich imagery. Nice work.
The beautiful synergy of man and nature captured in rich imagery. Nice work.
A beautiful poem to awaken to. It negative wind chill here. To visualize your poem sunshine was truly a blessing.
This is the perfect poem to wake up with! ... It is morning now here, and it is such a lovely day, and such a lovely poem!
The beautiful experience of sun-rise with another dawn is soothing in your poem, Valsa.
Sunshine makes the day bright. Cool breeze provides a loving touch.
I see two suns here - the celestial sun of the day and the sun of wakefulness. Then the lover comes - the breeze that ruffles the hair and then keeps company throughout the waking day as sunshine. Beautiful.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 12:12:53 PM # 1.0.0
It's a nice five liner, you have reminded me of Jay Shankar Prasad' poem - Beeti vibhavri Jagri, Amber panghat mein dubo rahi tara ghat usha nagari. If you could not understand, read its translation by me in English.......10