A king fisher swooped down
Over the silent lake
A flash of amber and blue
Bobbed up with a sloshing silver fish
Dangling from its beak like an ornate pendant
If we have that amount of peace in mind and the patience to admire little little things in nature, what a remedy they would be to ailing minds and hearts. Your sweet five liner clearly demonstrates how to do that. Mind you, only poets and artists can do this. Thank you for sharing.x
Sometimes few words works more than a full book.....nice one.....thank you for sharing :)
An image flashed through my mind as I read each perfectly placed word
the caption caught my attention - wonderful poem with beautiful picturesque
Wow so well written.......Poem and snap shot is complement to each other.
A brilliant picture of the bird swooping down and picking up the fish flashes through our mind on reading the poem and there is no need for any pictorial depiction.
You captured the instant more beautifully than the picture.
A powerful five-liner that weighs more than a long poem. Descriptive writing is definitely your forte. Another marvel of a poem.