Valsa George


Five Liner. Rain - Poem by Valsa George

Clouds gather over the far reaches of the sky
Rain pelts down in needles of silver
The Earth is tickled by the pin pricks
Dormant dreams resurrect
Blossoming every heart and the Earth

Topic(s) of this poem: rain


Comments about Five Liner. Rain by Valsa George

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/30/2017 12:58:00 PM)


    Fantastic expression on rain beginning with eloquent and amusing depiction. Rain pelts down in needles of silver is much interesting. It resurrects every heart abd earth. Thanks for posting this five liner. (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (9/13/2015 5:18:00 AM)


    A beautiful five liner but the fifth line seems to me dangerous, this foolish heart has always been a fifth columnist............10 (Report) Reply

  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (9/9/2015 7:50:00 PM)


    Acupuncture that cures the burning heart of Mother Earth! (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/9/2015 2:13:00 PM)


    Every heart blossoms as the dense clouds drop some rain. Nicely said. (Report) Reply

  • Kavya . (9/9/2015 1:43:00 AM)


    wow loved the lines
    Rain pelts down in needles of silver
    The Earth is tickled by the pin pricks

    superb Mam as always
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  • (9/8/2015 3:18:00 PM)


    I enjoyed reading your poem about the rain. Perhaps I shared that something you saw because I lived in Calcutta as a child and always went outside to play in the rain. It was fun. I liked the images tucked within your poem. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (9/8/2015 11:45:00 AM)


    I have never heard rain described this way. Beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • Roop Rekha Bhaskar (9/8/2015 4:02:00 AM)


    such beautiful lines. Needles of silver making the earth tickle! verbalizes rain in such expression. Needles of silver and pin-pricks... excellent descriptions of words woven in five lines. (Report) Reply

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (9/8/2015 2:00:00 AM)


    How wonderfully words can convert a natural event in to a beautiful painting; which only a Poet can do. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 8, 2015



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