Flower To Flower Poem by Kranthi Pothineni
Flower To Flower
I came across one flower
While walking in a garden
It saw me and gave a smile
I too smiled and walked
Each day in garden I smiled
One day I gazed at flower
At its plant and roots closely
I observed its dance in wind
And its dance made me sing
It made me smile all my time
Everyday I went to flower
Smiled with it and came back
My days went like seconds
Nights passed like years
Flower made me its lover
So I wrote songs on its dance
On its lovely beautiful smile
All about its charming beauty
And my state of dying slowly
In which I am smiling daily
One day I saw flower singing
In the garden while jogging
Song reveled its moving off
From my garden to a house
Of loved one from its past
I smiled on all my songs
While writing a new song
Its song of flower to flower
Which I gave to my flower
When departing from my lover
nice visual, extended metaphor: ''I observed its dance in wind And its dance made me sing It made me smile all my time'' well embedded into this symbolistical, descriptive poem..........10++++
This is very lovely write.. Very creative too.. I really did enjoy reading this one.. you did a good job here.. nice poem.. deserves many 10ss.. cheers and best wishes shan
A lovely graceful write. I failed to get the last comment though. liked the idea of using a beautiful flower to talk about a beautiful lover...................10+++
Great imagination...it tempts to read again and again...lovely flower
A beautiful ode to a natural wonder. Thanks Kranthi. I love flowers and write about them all the time.
Thanks for sharing…with a flowery smile compliment 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
a fable in a dream of a poem.....fancy or real is not the end...it's the fulfillment that...life comes in a most amazing moment with the other living creature....nice and touching view.... a 10 ++++
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12/6/2025 9:40:39 PM # 1.0.0
you put all your power into 'flower to flower' it actually carried me on that journey. a ten