I have something so fragile inside
It is nothing but a crystal orb
Reddish in tint, sometimes it gleams
Sometimes goes off like a fuse bulb
To combat all shocks and tremors,
It is well guarded within a rib cage,
Handle it with utmost care
Or else it will break into shards!
Heart can work day in and day out. It keeps working and works till death. It is fragile and it can break. Ribs only provide physical protection. Protection from feelings is another thing. Beautiful poem.
Yeah it is so easy to break these fragile hearts metaphorically speaking as shown by this delicate heartwarming sweet poem. The word choice is elegant too. Kudos. Great to read from u again, hope u have been well pal, missed u n missed reading from u. Take care Valsa.
What a lovely way to describe the heart.- - -I have something so fragile inside It is nothing but a crystal orb. They break so easily but at the same time can bear up under impossible odds. We have been made to be wonderfully complex, haven't we? I rather like your heart- -it is such a sensitive one and gives us such beautiful poetry to reflect upon. Thank you. 10 X 10! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Yes, heart is so delicate.All should be careful about matters of heart, lest it may break.- - - -A wonderful write ! !
The human heart. Yes, fragile and weak. Yet it can be surprisingly resilient. What I really love about this poem is how many memories it evokes. So well done!
It is nothing but a crystal orb, and it's too fragile on one hand but on the other it's crown of body and soul defended by their all might. Alas! When those we love bring tears in our eyes, it melts like a crystal of salt or sugar. a touching poem.
Heart is like a bubble – delicate – be it physical or the inner core Protect it from stress and aches of the soul with utmost care (10)
Sometimes memory remain and sometimes memories go back. To combat all shocks we think on. Having something so fragile is amazing definitely. Just like a crystal orb is inside. Interesting poem this is.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful write. Yes, heart is fragile and must be handled with care. A succinct gem of a piece. Loved it. A10