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Girls Please Listen - Poem by Vidi Writes

Girls Please Listen

It’s since a long time I am watching
There is a lot of difference
In how the girls and boys behave
Difference still continues
Even after becoming Man and women.

I would like to share my observations
What I learnt could be a guide to you
I want you girls to retain your charm
Want to help those who are confused.
Girls, you deserve good for what you are.

Girls, you are so sweet and charming
Boys, you are active and energetic
Girls you are not much sought after
Boys wherever you are you highlight
This is the dominant difference by nature.

Nature has already designed the craft for you.
From the day one of your birth, you live
Through all differences and indifference
Its better to realize the gifted qualities
And fill the void with self achievements.

You always yearn for the attention of other
Want to be pampered like your newborn brother
Care makes you sky and pomp makes you scare
You crave for the warmth and secure
At times, sad to feel the knock by own kinfolk

It’s from that tender age you admire the ‘boy’
An innocent adulation towards his grace
Wondering why not possible for your self
Try and match things with him to his state
Its better you know, that’s all hormone trends.

As you grow old, the adulation turns into craze
Boiling blood and changing bends call the shot
You wait every minute to be taunted and hunted
Efforts go into becoming the centre of attraction
You forget that you are born not to go after someone.

You think, you dream, you aspire and you do
The most of things, which please him
You just forget to set a path in your life
But seek to be carried by someone to heaven
Forgetting even the strength within to stand.

You melt with those ice creams offered
Turn into brown with those chocolates
You try in vein to get attached and pampered
Just think for a while, is it due to
Prolonged desire to be cared, since childhood?

Girls you dream about softy touches and feather
Conceive the fairy tale princess in you
Desire to be carried by the prince of a state
Dream about sleeping on flowery bed
But when you reach there, it’s just hard to feel.

There is nothing so charismatic about boys
Human being like you, with different hormones
You are tender and they are powerful
You should join together only when the time is ripe
All early efforts will spoil the joy of life.

Take some time to hear the story of other girls
Who lost their mood behind the charming princes
Is it worth wasting the time and energy?
If they say ‘Yes’ look into those eyes
You will find the lost shine and lost balance.

Male and Female magnetism is all by nature
It’s not just in humans but also in entire species
It’s the logic of proliferation of living creature
Humans apply romance to this logic
Worth, but don’t loose your balance over it.

It’s the healthy society where things are framed
Girls you should first find a space to stand
Learn to be dependable and not to depend
In Today’s age of science, try reasoning
Than becoming a reason to be bothered.

Girls don’t get derailed in the fantasy world
Compensate your low power with intelligence
Don’t get carried away by creams and sops
Once you are sound, you can reach what you want
But if you become hollow, sure, you will tumble.

Girls, I know it’s breathtaking to be enfolded
Exhilarating to be in the company of lover
Soothing to be pampered and taken care of
But anything beyond limit will be of sour taste
Learn the limits and then score the pleasures.

You watch out the behavior of those boys
They do have a broad scope and support
Most of them don’t chase but are getting chased
They are excellent in their balance and traits
Keep options and are in pursuit of a set virtue.

A few words with today’s mothers
Who already underwent those hectic experiences.
They should make effort to enlighten their girls
Tell them – the heat under the belly is not ‘LOVE’
The craze for sharp gazes shouldn’t be their dreams.

Mothers, I know you are also coiling your blood
To make both the ends meet in the family.
Still, take time to walk and talk to girls and tell them
What you have felt before and what you aspired
Tell them whether you could enjoy those desires.

Girls listen, many mother are shy and skeptic
Don’t know - their experiences will be your lessons
Many a times there is generation gap
A bottleneck between mother and daughter
Girls, be intelligent enough to gather her experiences.

You deserve greater respect in society and home
When you respect yourself and have self-confidence
During the young age, build your personality
Let the boiling blood have a vision to reach
Than to hang around, into the erratic emotions.

If you waste your energetic time in parlours
Try to show up and stand waving to the crowd
You loose your force in the days to come
Those temptations take you only into deep desert
Where mirages will cheat your eyes and soul.

Dear girls, when you set your goal and reach it
When you have command over your senses
When you live within the frames and scales
You will be self content, happy and beautiful
Life will then play its melodious romance with you.

(This poem i have written with great concern
watching the day by day trends of our girls
their confusion, their crave for identity and looks
their misconceptions and many more.

I really want to reach them through this poem
Hope i will succeed... and
Request readers to make it reach... will you please?)


Comments about Girls Please Listen by Vidi Writes

  • Indira Renganathan (6/12/2009 11:22:00 PM)

    Vidi, what I have been thinking to do for so long, you've done it...for me too a mother of two daughters only....congratulations...I think you should follow Raj's suggestion....great (Report) Reply

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  • Vinod Kumar (1/28/2009 8:03:00 AM)

    An absolutely Remarkable Poem great, According to the Circumstances of your surrounding experience, it was great, Really appreciatable, In the Nuclear Nano age Humanity is divided so many tiny pieces in the experimental table, they wants to know in deep how to become a green leaf a manure, They conduct several day long luctures, most of the girls and boys know very well what they are doing, and some of them dedly ignored to their knowledge, all are become independent very early, the averness, the knowledge, the job, the money, that`s all, I will convey to my near and dear boys and girls, thanks for the Amazing work,10++++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • (1/14/2009 10:59:00 PM)

    Dear Vidi, Will you please do me a favour? Make enough copies of this educative,
    instructive and persuasive poem for distribution to all the girls & co-education schools, requesting the Principlas to display this poem on the Message Boards
    of especially the senior classes! Our schools today only concentrate on rolling out
    ''high percentage students''! This was not the ONLY aim of the Missionary Schools of our days! ! The attention span of people these days have also greatly reduced!
    10! - Raj Nandy
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  • (8/24/2008 6:30:00 AM)

    great lines here, Vidi...a long composition very good, to say in afraid I would go out side the frame if I tend to point out all the goodness in this write...a poetic guide lines sure, not to girls alone but more importantly to boys who must learn to behave…behave understandingly towards those tender gentle Divine creation parts...the ones that later are to become the better parts in their lives...10+ (Report) Reply

  • (5/25/2008 12:32:00 PM)

    Another brilliant poem from your heart Vidi, i will pass it on to my grandaughters, thank you it speakes volumes. (Report) Reply

  • (5/10/2008 6:22:00 AM)

    'to teach and to delight' (Report) Reply

  • (5/5/2008 2:29:00 AM)

    yr message to the girls is very good..i especilly liked the part where u pleaded mothers to open up with their daughters sharing experiences n letting them know the REALITIES of life... its a genunie work.... with a nice message.. (Report) Reply

  • (5/4/2008 9:32:00 PM)

    hi vidi, i read 2 of your poems, they are both nicely written and your feelings are expressed clearly. good luck and i hope you will be read and understood by others. (Report) Reply

  • (5/4/2008 11:38:00 AM)

    these days girls are asking for trouble. the truth is women are tougher then they give themselves credit for.they should be working on their self esteem. i hope your message reaches them. (Report) Reply

  • (5/4/2008 9:25:00 AM)

    Vidi's point of view has been powerfully expressed here. Bravo. (Report) Reply

  • (5/4/2008 9:05:00 AM)

    I truly agree to your appeal. Girls being more sensitive are seduced easily……
    History tells us so many evidences of the same……Sita or Draupadi all became the victims of their innocence ….
    I personally feel that mothers should take up this stance to educate their daughters in a right way and ensure a secured and meaningful life further for them…
    I appreciate your concern beautifully composed in a poetic way…
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  • (4/8/2008 2:25:00 AM)

    Cleverly, dynamically and analytical 'scope' … with such verses it is possible will enrich seminaries, trainings for girls and their parents … I wish good luck … (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 31, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 4, 2009

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