Haiku- A Thought Poem by Valsa George

Haiku- A Thought

Rating: 4.9


Climb up a mountain
Not to look on garbage pile
But to see beauty

Thursday, April 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku,wisdom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 07 April 2018

We undertake an arduous journey for noble goals; else the effort be wasted. I love the many ways that one can look at this well crafted haiku. Thanks Valsa.

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Jaya Das 05 April 2018

Beautiful haiku....and well said though it is difficult to climb the mountain....but the beauty on reaching it is ethereal

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 10 April 2018

No sooner does the thought occur to us than we act upon it........yes thought is such a lofty thing.......Valsa....... very well penned haiku.......thanks for sharing....10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 April 2018

I absolutely agree with the comments of esteemed poetess G R Menon what she quotes of saint poet R N Tagore's words...Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder It's a beautiful Haiku! Great thought!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 09 April 2018

Perception matters a lot. Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. Yes truly, Valsa, we have to climb a mountain to see the beauty around. Great Haiku with great thought. Luckily, my vote button has started functioning. Full vote for you, my dear friend. :)

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Anjandev Roy 23 November 2019

Glorious haiku. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Mj Lemon 03 February 2019

Such a great thought, Valsa...Always look up, not down. This goes straight to myfavourites.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 May 2018

When we achieve any success after a lot of efforts, we should look around for the beauty of the positive things rather than the filthy negative ones. An excellent thought communicated in so few words, well done Valsa!

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Muhammad Ali 30 April 2018

Yes, there should be positivity in our efforts, goals and our manners when we are the reachers. beautiful haiku

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Mihaela Pirjol 17 April 2018

Wonderful juxtaposition! Wonderfully composed haiku!

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