Haiku- Autumn Poem by Valsa George

Haiku- Autumn

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Trees shed yellow leaves
They hasten to their grave
Moaning under feet

Saturday, February 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 06 February 2016

It's so painful to die and to be trampled by the ones who has basked under it's shade. Beautiful Haiku, Short and meaningful.

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Kelly Kurt 06 February 2016

It brought memories of beautiful autumn on this gloomy winter day

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 06 February 2016

Thousands of people gather to behold this scene, where ever it occurs. It is to mourn moaning or enjoy smiling? Whatever it may be, I enjoy the metaphoric manner in which 'color fall' was presented. Thanks for sharing.

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Nosheen Irfan 06 February 2016

Beautiful haiku. Autumn has a touch of romance about it despite the gloomy atmosphere. Rich imagery.

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Hazel Durham 07 February 2016

The passing of time and of seasons is beautifully captured and thanks for sharing!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 August 2018

This is a beautiful haiku on Autumn nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.10

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Beautiful lines. Very good poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 January 2018

Trees shed yellow leaves/They hasten to their grave/Moaning under feet.....The sorrow ends with joys....A beautiful Haku with a precious message.....Thanks for sharing dear madam!

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 March 2017

Respecting the ways of nature! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Kavya . 08 February 2016

oh wow, so righty said, yes the shed leaves moan underneath our feet, beautiful expression of autumn

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