Trees shed yellow leaves
They hasten to their grave
Moaning under feet
It brought memories of beautiful autumn on this gloomy winter day
Thousands of people gather to behold this scene, where ever it occurs. It is to mourn moaning or enjoy smiling? Whatever it may be, I enjoy the metaphoric manner in which 'color fall' was presented. Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful haiku. Autumn has a touch of romance about it despite the gloomy atmosphere. Rich imagery.
The passing of time and of seasons is beautifully captured and thanks for sharing!
This is a beautiful haiku on Autumn nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.10
Trees shed yellow leaves/They hasten to their grave/Moaning under feet.....The sorrow ends with joys....A beautiful Haku with a precious message.....Thanks for sharing dear madam!
oh wow, so righty said, yes the shed leaves moan underneath our feet, beautiful expression of autumn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It's so painful to die and to be trampled by the ones who has basked under it's shade. Beautiful Haiku, Short and meaningful.