Haiku. Time (5-7-5) Poem by Valsa George

Time - sprinting steed and Time as brooding sage.. underful contrast. Beautifully crafted haiku. Thanks.

sometimes tim is fleeting and sometimes it drags. A very good take on time.

This format is the finest of all. A conventional haiku with conviction of time in retrospection!

This is our thinking that sometimes makes time a sprinting steed and sometimes a brooding sage. But again it's time that changes our thinking! Valsa you have selected a very interesting topic A lovely philosophic write.

Swift in move and slow in turn that is how it is - time. Nice lines. Thank you.

lovely Haiku.. keep writing : )

Yes, time stretches and contracts as well, the most flexible, that science calls relative, a lovely haiku that highlights these facts.

Very nice Haiku..small yet profound

Time, a sprinting steed, is sometimes a brooding sage Swift and slow in turn! ...fine haiku

Time is fleeting but so precious! You have exquisitely penned this Haiku of 17 syllables! You experiment is a great success.....10