Haiku... Time Poem by Valsa George

A nice selfie with time's grannules of sand. Mam I enjoyed the Haiku. A huge 10++++is not enough. Please read my poem I fall asleep.

The hourglass of life keeps on tumbling...

time moves on and on. no one can resist its friction. I mean not a single mortal being and inorganic universe. beautiful piece Valsa G

Love it Valsa. Time funnels on never to return.

Valsa, this is such a gem. I remember my youth. I remember trying to hold on to that handful of sand....impossible! Time, like those sands, does definitely slip away.

A beautiful and meaningful haiku is well executed and amazingly shared. I love this haiku for which i have visited twice.

But your poems will live on and on.........Thanks Valsa

A thoughtful haiku that has inspired me to write something.

a deluxe vacuum cleaner may help.............with the sand. i'm not sure i can help with the 'time thing'. bri :)

I see the sand trickling and moving through the chasms...sometimes settling on a shelf for an eternity then moved along by the wind. A lovely haiku.