Hallucination Poem by Tareq Jalabi

Thanks for sharing. I love poetry about girls with brown eyes! haha.

A poem on feelings of admiration, admiringly penned...your words and imagination are no miser any where through out this write...wonderfully composed...10

this is such a nice piece, especially 2 stanza. hmm you are a great admirer, huh! ! keep it up, , man, ,

Amazing poem..i like the way you made the words at the end rhyme in every four sentences.

Woah It's soo Warm and Sweet and i love how you rhymed the words Well done

1] the warmest in God`s nation 2] two swords of her`s are not sinners / they sit away like in british dinners I quote these lines just to show the difference of this poet. It seems very much anti-poetic, but its temperament fits with contemporary style of thoughts. Hallucination is nothing anew to poets, its expression is also very conventional, but my prior experience of reading him....the spirit of creating above lines makes him different from others.............10/10 Regards, pranab

Awesome and juvenile.....10

Wow this is very very, well done. It's a ten in my book.

very nice poem friend...10

simply enchanting love from afar