She came to me as a hallusination
her beauty was beyond my imagination
i fantasized her breath and intonation
they were the warmest in God`s nation
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her brown eyes are innocent killers
her lovely lips are life fillers
the two swords of her`s are not sinners
they sit away like in british dinners
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when i expressed my admiration
she told me i was sweet
these words were not of my creation
but i saw an angel from head to feet
i`ve gained nothing but more exclamation
that i couldn`t drink or hardly eat
Aww this one is very sweet very sweet I love it! its really sweet and kind how you explain her
Attraction, makes the blood rush, exhilarating. Very nice poem I like the rhyme.10
wwoooww its good honestly i love it i love the words you use i love the rhyme its an awesome peice of work
1] the warmest in God`s nation 2] two swords of her`s are not sinners / they sit away like in british dinners I quote these lines just to show the difference of this poet. It seems very much anti-poetic, but its temperament fits with contemporary style of thoughts. Hallucination is nothing anew to poets, its expression is also very conventional, but my prior experience of reading him....the spirit of creating above lines makes him different from others.............10/10 Regards, pranab
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
so sweet, simple, breathtaking