He's Not You Poem by Practicing Poetess

He's Not You

Rating: 5.0


He is the perfect gentleman
Well-trained in courtesy
Considerate, and helpful
Treats me like a lady

And I enjoy his company,
But when the day is through
I face a sad reminder
That he's not you.

He's here; you're not- - that's plain to see
Though I still want you near
It's you I miss, for whom I care
You are to me so dear

And even though his friendship
Is wonderful and new,
That distant aching in my heart
Reminds me he's not you.



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Monday, October 21, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: absence,friendship,longing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ray Hansell 23 October 2019

Another little nugget from the poet who digs deep into her soul.

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Practicing Poetess 23 October 2019

Thank you so much, Ray, for that sweet comment! Calling it a nugget and saying I dig deep sounds a bit like gold mining! : -)

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louis rams 22 October 2019

he's not me i agree, but he sets your heart and mind free

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Practicing Poetess 22 October 2019

{{{Louis}}}! ! ! It's wonderful to hear from you! He doesn't exactly set my heart & mind free, but if you can't be with the one you want- - well, be with who you can. A friend certainly beats loneliness! As another poet stated earlier, loneliness often goes with the territory of being a poet. Take care. : -)

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 October 2019

A sad reminder! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Practicing Poetess 22 October 2019

Thanks, Edward Kofi, for your appreciative feedback! : -)

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Kostas Lagos 22 October 2019

Thank you for posting this precious little gem Poetess!

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Practicing Poetess 22 October 2019

Thank you, Kostas, for giving my poem such a complimentary comment! : -)

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 21 October 2019

a very beautiful poem on friendship................10+

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Practicing Poetess 21 October 2019

Thank you so very much, Sankhajit! : -)

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