Her Love Song Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Her Love Song

Rating: 5.0


I will hold your hands in mine
Will rest my head on your shoulder
And will walk along summer beach

I will hold your hands in mine
Will rest my head on your shoulder
And will sit beside the winter fire

I will hold your hands in mine
Will rest my head on your shoulder
And will watch the pouring shower

I will hold your hands in mine
Will rest my head on your shoulder
And will slip into sleep every night

I will leave your hands from mine
Will move head from your shoulder
And will wait for you to reach stars

Wednesday, December 30, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: beach
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 30 December 2009

Much love in simple things.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 December 2009

This is like a love song more musical to be sung.

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Marieta Maglas 30 December 2009

nice repetition I will hold your hands in mine Will rest my head on your shoulder wonderful lyric poem 10+++++++++

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 30 December 2009

very well written... i was wandering, is this a free verse? ... but whether it is or not, it's still good.

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Seamus O Brian 19 June 2015

Sometimes the beauty is in what you can't see. Enjoyed this!

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Walterrean Salley 03 January 2010

This is a beautiful poem. Love it.

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Eyan Desir 31 December 2009

Nice poem I didnt like the repeat but you did a fair job..10

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Louis Rams 30 December 2009

glad you held the hand for the stars are hard to reach.

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Janell Cressman 30 December 2009

very awesome poem! ! ! ! ! (10 from me)

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