Holy Song Of Freedom Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Astute use of sound-words-'ting' 'tong', 'ding', dong'. The poem makes me feel free. India is free too.

No ding-dong at all today there is a place in your side known as HALF- LONG Don't ask me why but they say it's the loneliest place on earth still today half long all day they only play ding-dong at all day all day whole day till night's sway nice recalling anyway

A wonderful and inspiring poem. It depicts the love of one's country and being proud of the freedom it has gained. The closure lines that call for unity is very moving.10 +++

Your poem made me hear the chimes of freedom. And hear angels singing. Excellent write, Kumarmani!

Fredom is precious than silver and gold. Happy Independence day, Mahakul Ji.

Songs of Freedom! ! ! Flags of peace and love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

An uplifting poem for all nations to sing? ......well penned Kumarmani with freedom in mind!

Loved all the Ting tings ting tong- -such a happy song! ! I felt instantly cheerful! ! And then there were 3 words that just stopped me in my tracks- -so beautiful, so evocative- - -] Forest sings rain. Yes! ! ! ! !

Pearls and pebbles tell us fable cling, Flag of love and flag of peace both sing. Freedom, freedom, flag of freedom is king, Flying over stars and moon flag does sing. - - - - - - - - A great poem on 'Freedom', thanks for sharing.

Pearls and pebbles tell us fable cling, Flag of love and flag of peace both sing......a great patriotic poem! Thanks dear sir for sharing! (10)