Something is special, today you ping,
The holy song of freedom we all sing.
Ring you ring the ring, you feel zing,
Day of freedom calls let us all sing.
Ting tings ting tong, ting tong ting,
No ding-dong at all today let us sing.
Sing for own nation in cheer you ding,
Forest sings rain hears you too sing.
Pearls and pebbles tell us fable cling,
Flag of love and flag of peace both sing.
Freedom, freedom, flag of freedom is king,
Flying over stars and moon flag does sing.
Holy song of freedom let us all sing,
Unity is strength we know, let us ping.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,14 August 2018. All rights reserved.
No ding-dong at all today there is a place in your side known as HALF- LONG Don't ask me why but they say it's the loneliest place on earth still today half long all day they only play ding-dong at all day all day whole day till night's sway nice recalling anyway
A wonderful and inspiring poem. It depicts the love of one's country and being proud of the freedom it has gained. The closure lines that call for unity is very moving.10 +++
Your poem made me hear the chimes of freedom. And hear angels singing. Excellent write, Kumarmani!
Fredom is precious than silver and gold. Happy Independence day, Mahakul Ji.
Songs of Freedom! ! ! Flags of peace and love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
An uplifting poem for all nations to sing? ......well penned Kumarmani with freedom in mind!
Loved all the Ting tings ting tong- -such a happy song! ! I felt instantly cheerful! ! And then there were 3 words that just stopped me in my tracks- -so beautiful, so evocative- - -] Forest sings rain. Yes! ! ! ! !
Pearls and pebbles tell us fable cling, Flag of love and flag of peace both sing. Freedom, freedom, flag of freedom is king, Flying over stars and moon flag does sing. - - - - - - - - A great poem on 'Freedom', thanks for sharing.
Pearls and pebbles tell us fable cling, Flag of love and flag of peace both sing......a great patriotic poem! Thanks dear sir for sharing! (10)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Astute use of sound-words-'ting' 'tong', 'ding', dong'. The poem makes me feel free. India is free too.