.. I Fly Away..........................(New Version) Poem by Eyan Desir

nice poem, other side of land always seems green but nothing is better than what god has suggested us to live with..... poem flows well.....

Expressive write...thanks...10

fluently written poems gives joys and this poem is fluent and affluent in contents and idea

quite nice i feel the same sometimes

beauiful hun! ! ! thiz iz so advanced for me! ! ! wonderful you do a great job ^_^

I like the way your emotion how is tamed and sensation tracked. Good piece of art of yours.10+++

Wonderful to fly away from that torment. Beautiful expression of feeling.

deep thoughts... expressively written Life is just like that... 10+++ Maia

full of expression with a wonderful flow.....10

Trapped behind closed doors - yes I too would fly with the birds - free....a positive alternative