I Lost A Lovely Dream Poem by Valerie Dohren

I Lost A Lovely Dream

Rating: 4.8


Oh, somewhere in the deep, dark night,
I lost a lovely dream -
It drifted through my sleeping hours,
Just like a sparkling stream.

It left an imprint on my mind,
That I will ne’er forget -
Such was the beauty of its form,
Upon my heart now set.

I’ve searched within my memory,
This dream to now recall -
But only shadows linger there,
It’s gone, once and for all.

It melted into vapoured clouds,
Then floated far away –
Becoming just an image lost,
As night turned into day.

I know my dream was beautiful,
It filled my heart with glee -
Oh, that I could recall it now,
It was so lov-el-y.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 29 June 2013

Very enjoyable. The sweet dream, fading from our memory. Yet we know it was there Perhaps something like the place we were before we were born

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Angel Lacanfora 23 June 2013

Very nice, I enjoyed it!

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Kavya . 24 June 2013

a lovely poem too.............

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Lucifera Santez 24 June 2013

oh nerve racking..............................

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Kevin Halls 24 June 2013

Why do the best dreams vanish quickly on waking, but the bad one's remain for hours? Probably down to guilt! Nice one Val.

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Lawerence Mize 17 August 2014

Great poem Val. I love reading your poems.

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Amitava Sur 24 June 2014

A beautiful poem describing the full satisfaction of mind during being in that dream and forgetting all pains during that time. I wish you have several dreams like thisone in days to come.

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John Brown 17 July 2013

A lovely poem Val. I've lost a few myself.

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Claudia Krizay 11 July 2013

Very beautiful poem, Valerie- -Claudia

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Yasmin Khan 11 July 2013

Lovely dream described in lovely rhymes and images and how good that you could recall it.

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