Sky looks an angel in orange gown
Birds enchant beautiful sounds
Clouds run to be sky's crown
Winds blowing swiftly
Making themselves proud
Imbibed in rainbow's colors
All shining bright
Aiming for new heights
I wish I could be a kite
Don't want to be propelled
Don't want to be controlled
Want to sail in laminar flow
Without hip hop and without any show
Leaping from one cloud to the other
Dancing and aiming further and further
Without enrolling into fight
Aiming for new heights
I wish I could be a kite
Love to dance with the avians
Nest clouds in thunder & rains
Enjoying as if space's guest
Makig mockery of Mr Everest (Mount Everest)
Far away from everyone's sight
Cherishing the beautiful flight
Aiming for new heights
I wish I could be a kite
I know that feeling, the wish to fly, as a bird or in your case a kite, a freedom poem, just beautiful.
Painted the words with the hue of poetic imagination. Splendid! .
Wow! ! ! A very nice topic indeed... I always dream of being a bird... flying high in the sky.. no limits its just you and no one else... And yes now a kite... I loved this poem.. feeling of independence...
it has got a charm and light....to be a kite....like the wish every human has wings...
i like this poem the most from all your poems that i have seen so far...in an innocent way and with spontaneous flow of words, the poem is remarkable...it reminds me of one of the first poems i wrote, ' To be a Cloud '..well done.
Very nice poem...i really love this...this is the best poem..i hv read, written by you....keep up the good work....a poem written in the spirit of william wordsworth....wandering lonely as a cloud....i wish i could be a kite....thanks for sharing+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
ha haha a...mockery of mt everest......i liked it v much..... nice comparison... keep aiming high.....may ur life be like dat.... grt poem.. superb rhymes...