If There Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

If There

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there is no love
if there is mental torture

this is not conjugal life
if there is physical torture

there is no husband or wife
if there has no mutual understanding friendship

there is no peaceful family lifestyle
if there has always quarrelsome day and night

this society cannot be civilized
if there has beastly discrimination in man and woman

there has no happy marriage bonding in loving couple
if there inhumane distrust controls the minds



30.05.2020 Chattogram

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
From my comment on "Happy Marriage" poem by Taslima Nasrin
dated on 30.05.2020
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 02 June 2020

This is brilliant and relevant......thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 June 2020

This society cannot be civilized! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 31 May 2020

good solo views MB OF BD BUT this society cannot be civilized if there has beastly discrimination in man and woman FOR NO DISCRIMINATION GROUP GUYS WITH GUYS AND GALS WITH GALS Then decide in whose arms to hide all are specimens of society hidden from inside ONLY APPLY POWDER AND ROSE to their nose now choice is all yours we all suppose your decision be yours experience counts after all

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Yoonoos Peerbocus 31 May 2020

love is the key that leads to bonding

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Varsha M 31 May 2020

Awesome couplet describing every essentials needed. Indeed very true there is no life without them all. There is no love If there is mental torture. Very true. There is no conjugal life If there is physical torture. Yes I agree. And signature closure is mind blowing There has no happy marriage bonding in loving couple There inhumane distrust controls the mind. Well penned sir. Appreciations and admiration.

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