If You Came My Way... Poem by Nosheen Irfan

A breeze, the shade and home. I can't imagine anything better.

I too like the image of a sweetly humming breeze in summer. The poem unwinds both the speaker and the reader. Thanks for sharing Nosheen. :)

This poem is a great illustration to show that there is much beauty in simplicity! It has given me the feel of a breeze coming and caressing my face and tousling my hair! A poem so glamorous without being ostentatious!

it is a lovely write and i like this -Humming sweetly to me- very much.. :)

A warm day! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

If you came my way, a breeze it would be humming sweetly to me.....sweet expresion. A fascinating poem.

Oh, I just felt all the tension in me unwind. Due to an incredibly gentle and soothing write. Perfect, Nosheen, perfect! This deserves more than a bouquet of ten's- this deserves Poem of the Day every day for a year! 10's and onto my fav list!

Fantastic, hope, desire and longing nicely put together...10+++

There are poems that touch after reading again and again but it's a poem that touches the heart in a single reading. On a warm June day If you came my way I'd be home at last After miles and miles of road. Amazing lines!

Something familiar that brings one home...the desire of so many. A terrific poem, Nosheen.