Immature Humanity! Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Immature Humanity!

Rating: 4.8


All I stand still here, but on the nib of death
Youth are dished up brutally and bathed under the thunder
Stormy day and night fucks us lovingly
And we become pregnant in immature humanity!
Homosapiens sperm today flies the flag of inhumanity
and shouts at haughty bone- we are civilized cap-a-pie!

- May 02,2018 Chittagong

Immature Humanity!
Tuesday, May 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: brutality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Allport 29 May 2018

a poem with a message of stop and take a good look at what benefit being in a collective really entails? ...…..well penned

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Lyn Paul 29 May 2018

Shocking, but so real. How can this be happening? It is brutal.

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Britte Ninad 29 May 2018

excellent penned on the scenery brutality nice 10+++

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Muzahidul Reza 30 May 2018

Yet you lotd immature, but this immature humanity is sinking in sins; but i see zero humanity in human world, ........ ........... great write

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 31 May 2018

you seem to be a love poet the night you say read me then come over and share romantic poetry o boy

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Adeeb Alfateh 14 February 2021

Sometimes humanity takes birh in the embryo of brutality!

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Britte Ninad 09 August 2018

So interesting Title - Immature Humanity! Strong writing

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Riza Braholli 28 June 2018

Hi poet. it hurts to the bone but is bitter truth...

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Akhtar Jawad 04 June 2018

The animal has yet to become a human, a bitter truth so effectively penned.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 June 2018

A timely poem on violence and heinous crimes. An insightful piece of work. So poignant.10

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