The extreme storm waves
Aim to sweep the running clouds
And the lone sparrow.
Copyright 2022, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
If I didn't do any better, I'd swear that there's a haiku competition happening on PH. And you're definitely a finalist with this brilliant haiku, Rose Marie. Thoroughly enjoyed every word of every line.
Congratulations, Rose Marie. Today this magnificent Haiku is judged as Rank # 25 in the list of Best Poems of Members, featured on PoemHunter.
Unnikrishnan, this loveliest Haiku and very sad brevity is TODAY on number 19 on the Best Member Poems List of Member Poets. That changes each day, methinks
Lovely haiku. Nature spurs the imagination in so many ways to direct our hearts ever so gently.
Yikes May God be with the sparrow! .. Very deep heart moving imagery! ..
The sweep of a storm can be magnificent!
A powerful, dramatic and lovely haiku. I enjoyed it a lot.
what a lovely image you created and placed in my mind---excellent writing, my friend--top marks of course
Very impressive and inspiring....especially the lone sparrow...lovely write
Congratulations once again. Today this magnificent Haiku is ranked #14 on the Best Member poems. btw, have you seen my poem "Message of Peace 02"?
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