Impending Darkness - Haiku Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Impending Darkness - Haiku

Rating: 5.0

The extreme storm waves
Aim to sweep the running clouds
And the lone sparrow.

Copyright 2022, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Richard Wlodarski 08 December 2022

If I didn't do any better, I'd swear that there's a haiku competition happening on PH. And you're definitely a finalist with this brilliant haiku, Rose Marie. Thoroughly enjoyed every word of every line.

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Congratulations, Rose Marie. Today this magnificent Haiku is judged as Rank # 25 in the list of Best Poems of Members, featured on PoemHunter.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 December 2022

Unnikrishnan, this loveliest Haiku and very sad brevity is TODAY on number 19 on the Best Member Poems List of Member Poets. That changes each day, methinks

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Savita Tyagi 08 December 2022

Lovely haiku. Nature spurs the imagination in so many ways to direct our hearts ever so gently.

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Rebecca Navarre 10 December 2022

Yikes May God be with the sparrow! .. Very deep heart moving imagery! ..

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Rob Lamberton 27 January 2023

The sweep of a storm can be magnificent!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 27 January 2023

A powerful, dramatic and lovely haiku. I enjoyed it a lot.

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Susan Williams 23 January 2023

what a lovely image you created and placed in my mind---excellent writing, my friend--top marks of course

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Indira Renganathan 19 January 2023

Very impressive and inspiring....especially the lone sparrow...lovely write

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Congratulations once again. Today this magnificent Haiku is ranked #14 on the Best Member poems. btw, have you seen my poem "Message of Peace 02"?

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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