Too much may make one mad
(yet, too little can be as bad) .
The more that you think (and think and think)
the more you forget to wash - - you stink!
So, look into your heart sometime,
but don't forget life's more than a Rhyme - -
or Reason may finally desert you
and your kinfolk may act to hurt you.
A Sort of Moral:
A stinky thinker is no better than dry ink
or a rinky-dink poem like this (wink* wink*) !
7.18.06
Interesting Esther, you really have a knack to link fun with fact. Anjana
All cleaned up and ready to show, a great piece so individual Thankyou Love duncan X
Very clever! At least you don't use dirty words.. I know poetry can be addictive, but please don't bring the laptop in the tub with you! - chuck
How very witty! Love it. Love it....i think i think too much! ...lol Preets
I think my family will agree You may have writ this poem for me. You wouldn't think writing would get you all worked up into a sweat. But comes a time that loved ones send that look that says that you offend. Discretion being the highest bower, Excuse me while I go and shower.
Esther, a really zany poem I love it! 10/10! This is the first one Ive read so far. Off to see more. Would love you to visit my website. Will message you though. Lisa 0x0
You've spotted my symptoms - eek! But I didn't expect you to gossip about them. Too little instrospection isn't 'as bad' - it's called 'lack of insight'. This merry, ominous poem reveals a balanced appreciation - and is just a terrific write!
Upbeat, fun and full of wisdom - love it! Smiling (not thinking!) Justine.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Esther, your poem (well, that and my repugnant body odor) has made me realize that I've been over thinking things lately. Great poem and a very important moral ;) Brian