It's September Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

It's September

Rating: 4.6


Time is born to unstoppable walk, unknown towards
End of summer, wandering now thru the fall season

Early autumn, the first month of tranquiller breeze
Blowing onshore winds west to the east touching all

Corn moon of the late summer there attends to shine
After every three years it rises bright in the night sky

Barley crops are smiling on the field of this month
Green to brown crops, mostly eaten in pearled form

Sapphire, the transparent precious blue stone its gem
As month's birthstone it carries wisdom and integrity

Let a small hummingbird with shining blue come to me
Let the violet color in its plumage and tail hugs my entity


30.09.2020 Chattogram

Wednesday, September 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: how i feel,september
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 30 September 2020

The coming of autumn. Beautifully presented

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Varsha M 30 September 2020

Let a small hummingbird with shining blue come to me Let the violet color in its plumage and tail hugs my entity... beautiful closure. But it's the end of September Ready to leap new conquer Let's hope time brings new galore As we proceed to have more...well written Poetry. Thank-you.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 September 2020

Loveliest description of the month September, Mahtab! Unstoppable walks without disguise, precious poem and a delight to read. Let a small hummingbird with shining blue come to me Let the violet color in its plumage and tail hugs my entity WOW! One choice of at least 300 kinds of humminbirds, dear Poet! Greatest! that smallest bird must hug your entity? Amazing dear Mahtab I like very much this fascinating poem sans (=without) disguise. How wise.5 stars.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 September 2020

September has now come and gone who will come next till another one is born Librans are a pain a drain of EGO alone they maintain like higher wheat grain who can them sustain but CHUPPE RUSTOM BD of mb sirf aap hee tc

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Mac Che 25 January 2021

masterly handles the features of the month September.........God bless you

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Valsa George 04 October 2020

Early autumn, the first month of tranquiller breeze Blowing onshore winds west to the east touching all Autumn is about to come! This time of the year is so pleasant with a cool breeze gently blowing. Just after the monsoon rains, the days are sunny and cool! Your poem offers a lightness of mind and gratifying delight!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 October 2020

A well composed poem. Truly marvelous and outstanding...5 stars*****

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Suresh Kumar Ek 01 October 2020

Seasons dance And blossoms In your poem Thanks Mehtab

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Akhtar Jawad 30 September 2020

A nice description of how a poet feels in September. A wonderful portrait by a great poet!

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